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Old 03-23-06, 06:18 PM   #1
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Jae Stackz feat. Lindsie - A Second Chance

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Verse 1: Jae Stackz
Hook: Lindsie
Verse 2: Jae Stackz
Hook: Lindsie
Outro: Lindsie

Left Feed On:

Leady - Gay Bashin

Ecko - On The Block
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Old 03-24-06, 01:13 AM   #2
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hmmm...after the diss track ill sit back n give some good honest feed....

ha love this beat....the beine song stays on my playlists....okay
its still the lisp thing...it takes a lil bit away from the delivery, but adds to the emotion....
you kept the lyrics deep on the track....i like that...nothing bad...i respect the q line...it shows you dont hold a grudge thats honerable....few people can do that.....the girl sounds nice, but i hear the noise redux or an echo too much....sounds very robotic....but shes a good singer...overall...good track...better then some of the stuff ive heard from you....your showing progress....i have no complaints bout the lyrics...pretty good song...work on the girls part with the echoey sound...n yep...keep it up man...
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Old 03-24-06, 10:42 AM   #3
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another great track...good flow good delievery good lyrics...the girl on the track adds a great touch to it....8.5/10

i'm done with my verses on our collab i'll send you the beat over aim just holla at me
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Old 03-24-06, 02:48 PM   #4
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Thanks yall........
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Old 03-24-06, 05:16 PM   #5
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uppin............
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Old 03-25-06, 09:50 AM   #6
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Ite listenin.......Nice beat....ite 1st verse is nice...good flow.....dope lyrics.....good emotion and delivery aswell.......Hook is nice the gurl gives a good vibe to the song......second verse again is dope....you really developed a unique style on tha mic it's nice....Again hook is dope......Overall 9.0/10

Good track mayne....keep up.
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Old 03-25-06, 09:51 AM   #7
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I apreciate dat nigguh....
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Old 03-25-06, 10:31 AM   #8
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yea...I flowed to this beat before...good

beat is loud though...can barely hear your intro ad libs

hmm @ Q line...we already discussed that so yea

Your flow fits this beat well...good lyrics mainly because they're personal

the singing sounds nice, but was a tad off beat, IMO


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Old 03-25-06, 11:28 AM   #9
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Thanks and yeah I wrote this a while ago..we koo now fam
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Old 03-25-06, 01:36 PM   #10
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Aigh

Flows koo on verses,ridin beat well

beats dope

deliverys koo

emotions fits track well

hook lets the emotion part down a lil,sounds monotone but its koo add on

koo track lyrics were nice,fit the beat well

overall:8/10
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Old 03-25-06, 01:38 PM   #11
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i like the feel of this joint, that word fam....the hook is hot too, ya lyrics is nice

good drop homeboi
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Old 03-25-06, 01:41 PM   #12
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Thanks...fam...1
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Old 03-27-06, 09:30 AM   #13
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Ive always love this beat. The beginning is oo loud bro...But when you kick in very very good...u've improved alot since i last listened to you bro....ur flow and lyrics are great...presence is dope and emotion is there! im not feeling the mixing on the girl singing, its ashame cuz she has a nice voice but that the only bad point!

good track bro!
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Old 03-27-06, 11:39 AM   #14
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