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Old 03-26-06, 01:01 PM   #1
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ripples in time...

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once u r born, time freezes almost slightly.
breathing lightly u scared until ur held tightly.
ur in ur mothers arms, she looks down and smiles.
u were just born, u passed the first of many trials.
in life u will be tested, each much harded then the last.
look back at the past, all the trails u have surpassed.
love, and hate, good and evil. its all the same.
when u came* u realized that life is not a game.
this aint no die and comeback and startover.
if u die here u die for good thats it game over.
no levels to surpass but hidden trails to face.
school, family, buying a home for u to enbrace.
getting out the house and making it on ur own.
so one day u can b called king of your thrown.
but untill then look at the life u have ahead.
i practiced that with these rhymes in my head.
so u can too, with just a few decent rhymes.
keep that in mind cus we all just ripples in time.

:/ lost flow a few times so u might... sorry bout that.
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Old 03-26-06, 01:23 PM   #2
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Old 03-26-06, 03:37 PM   #3
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Old 03-26-06, 10:23 PM   #4
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nice work on the sliyable work.nice kinda flow u getting better keep on trying...................................
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