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04-06-06, 04:37 PM
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"Birds in the Metal"...Mixtape Track...Leave Links and I'll Return ASAP...
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Word...deep track. Leave links and I'll return the favor ASAP. I'll edit with links. |
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04-06-06, 04:40 PM
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Quality is dope...beat caught my attention and had me turning off the television so I could hear it. The hook is fucking awesome...listening right now, deep lyrics, the woman is coming on, and it seems like a good addition to the track...weird thing about your line about your town...since you were saying you wanted to stay in your roots. Best yet bro, it's going on the IPod...
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04-06-06, 04:53 PM
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hmm...ehhh @ the beat
bad quality to on the beat..........u come in nice....emotion is great....queality is still ehhh lyrics r hot.....nice multis n shit....a bit hard to understand em tho....deep shit man.... hooks nice...2nd verse is pritty much the same tight shit man..idk about the beat tho
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04-06-06, 05:22 PM
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Thanks for the feed...
Here are my links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225897 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225569 |
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04-06-06, 05:36 PM
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I happen to love the beat...
sounds like u messed up at one part of the hook...but it's nice dubs don't match up that nicely good flow wit the beat tho... lyrics are good nice track 1 |
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04-06-06, 06:05 PM
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Beat is nice, nice guitars...hook is nice...decent...not my style but its nice..ure flow is real nice dope...but yea dubbs are a lil off...lyrics are dope mayne...hook is growin on me..im likin the concept...delivery is nice too, ure style fits this beat..i like the sample
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04-06-06, 06:18 PM
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Thanks for the feed...uppin.
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04-06-06, 07:43 PM
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Uppin'...I will return the favor.
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04-07-06, 10:43 AM
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Uppin....
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04-07-06, 10:50 AM
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Hook is dope, Buuuuuuttt.. Your delivery of it needs more tone and you sounded a bit shaky on it... You really gotta use a more husky and solid voice on that..
Lyrics are deep.. Inspiring even.. Could use some work on ya rhyme schemes and delivery.. But I feel the message ya gettin accross.. The beat was tight, dont really know about the singing parts.. Sounds a bit too country... Overall, this is a mad big improvement on the last shit I heard of yours.. Jus a few minor problems that'll fix themselves up through experience. |
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04-07-06, 11:55 AM
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IP:
Thanks for the feed...uppin. I will return the favor.
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04-08-06, 12:49 PM
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Uppin'.... will return the favor...
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04-08-06, 01:25 PM
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can you rtf..to my joint "Now Ride" wit UNF, it shud be jus below this
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04-08-06, 02:49 PM
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yo.... beat is pretty gay at first.. but the song is over and i like the beat now....
like cho said quality is ehh... hook is very monotone... but gets the point across i dont really like theese kinda tracks.. but shit sounds like my life....i really liked this track man... dope lyrics flow was simplistic but it gave this song a laid back kinda feel...nice shit for real.. third verse was the best ..... 8/10 rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showt...553#post2713553 Still Get My Grind On good feedback
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04-08-06, 10:07 PM
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Thanks man...uppin'.
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