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04-10-06, 11:09 AM
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"Rainy Days (Last Stand)"...Tight Underground Banger...Leave Links, And I'll RTF ASAP
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Word...top track. Just went for punch lines over this hard underground beat. Leave links and I'll return the favor. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226055 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226086 checked Last edited by will appear : 04-26-06 at 01:28 PM. |
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04-10-06, 12:21 PM
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OYD
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What's Hot:
Beat...almost like a battle beat...familiar too Delivery is right for this controlled tempo beat...very good there Lyrics/flow are all quality...nothing great, but good What's Not: Dubs are out of sync...Also, I suggest moving the pan closer to center, maybe 25-20...It sounds like you have them at 40-50. It'll make them sound more in sync Hook is delivered well, but I didn't remember anything from it. Overall: Flawed, but good no doubt PS...RTF on my, Cho, and Woody's track "Kill em all" tyvm |
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04-10-06, 02:39 PM
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Thanks...uppin'...I will return the favor.
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04-11-06, 01:59 AM
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Whoa...you guys are fuckin hurtin.
Uppin. |
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04-11-06, 11:21 AM
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Holy fuck this has been slept on...
UPPIN. I WILL return the favor. |
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04-12-06, 02:33 PM
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Upp..... |
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04-12-06, 06:28 PM
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IP:
I almost thought it was senser on the intro hahaha, but I could till with your lil english accent there haha. one thing I dislike about your shit that throws off the flow is that you ecko your whole verse I think, and it throws the flow off a lot. if you gonna use the ecko just ecko the dubs so you can hear em behind everything instead of hearing the ecko of the dub plus the verse, it sounds bad. your lyrics are hot and the beat is hot. your delivery is strong. the hook I don't really like that much but it's not horrible or anything. the rainy rainy anyway thing is weird. overall a good track man, probably the best to top your birds in the metal track.
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04-24-06, 11:46 AM
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I don't echo my verses, just my dubs. :\ Your speakers maybe..?
Anyways...uppin. |
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04-24-06, 07:14 PM
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IP:
Wow...I left sooo much feed today, and haven't got a single favor back.
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04-25-06, 04:05 PM
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And still not a single thing.
Whoa. |
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04-26-06, 12:35 PM
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IP:
Seriously, I may never leave feed again.
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04-26-06, 10:42 PM
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Fuck this shit. |
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04-27-06, 12:47 AM
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Whys That?
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Playing.
intro is attention grabbing. Flows good bro, lyrics are good, nice concept.. beats cool... Hooks cool man. good quality and mixing bro. nice track. like it. |
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04-27-06, 12:42 PM
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Thanks for the feed...uppin.
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04-27-06, 03:16 PM
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im feelin this beat soo fuckin much
your flow is cool if u didnt have that slight english accent it wouldnt be as good but the accent kills it..its not so thick where i cant understand what your sayin but thick enough to tell your not from the U.S lyrics are decent im feelin presence and delivery are there only thing to work on is your quality and and keep practicin stay spittin
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