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04-15-06, 04:22 AM | #1 | ||
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Teenage Love
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Sick New Joint I Just Got Finished Doing
Hi-Fi Low-Fi Left Feed On These Tracks http://community.rapverse.com/showt...007#post2720007 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2720026
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04-15-06, 09:32 AM | #2 | ||
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Uppin This Track
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04-15-06, 12:34 PM | #3 | ||
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IP:
ight listenin
quality really bad but ive heard worse flow-you sound like a down south rapper 2/5 at least you stayed on beat just a boring flow presence-0/5 i just didnt feel you on the track delivery-0/5 you didnt bring it(in my randy jackson from american idol voice) it didnt sound like you meant wat you were saying lyrics-1/5 i mean your lacking in quality of your lyrics just gotta up vocab and add multis metaphors similies and shit like that overall 1/5 this was a boring track nice beat though and no beef just tellin u what i think
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04-15-06, 02:57 PM | #4 | ||
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IP:
He dont have a south accent...gotta east coast sound to me...
It was boring though...beat's sweet tho...cute beat ya know it fits the track...i lyk ya adlibbin and shit its nice...but your sounds is 2 monotone...i feel the vibe you was trying for you just need to switch up the flow...or somethin so i wanna listen to the song..right now i'm just listenin to hear beat changes ya know. Chorus is okay. But your talking instead of spittin. Keep up. hollaatchagerrl -Truth-
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04-15-06, 04:47 PM | #5 | ||
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Word Yo East Coast Rapper.Uppin This
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04-15-06, 05:07 PM | #6 | ||
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the beat sounds down south there fore you comin off as down south accent...but i hear the east coast in it....decent track i wasn't feelin the flow...lil slow even for a love track...keep droppin em...6/10
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