ok.. this is from a battle I had with this kid on another site. I'd like feed on it. so Im posting it as a diss now


your 24?

Lmao.


look. ^heres my pic. I’ve never felt you a threat
I wont even use yours. you just need all the help u can get
I’ll let you pursue your dream. stopping ya would hurt
so make a fiction film of you actually dropping a good verse
ya name’s Mark? cool. but keep ya raps on the shelf!
to leave 1 of ^those. you’ll need to name ya kid after yaself
one of the first textcees. when will you win ya fossil?
Mark always comes in 2nd. like the book does in the Gospels
plus your area aint the issue; I can trully say this with you
shit..the Bay got some sick dudes. while u got some basic shit dude
been whack for years. the point’s simple, do better
come close to a W?. yea.. if u put ya name’s symbols together
we’re both getting old for this. I’ll still laugh at ya though
& make sure u dont see more than 24. like crap after the show
found out you work at Fish Eye. so I know your a shook bitch b
I catch biters. & u only work ^ there. cuz all ya stuff looks fishy
you seriously suck faggot. these kids dont be hating
last time you saw a vote-blaze. it was weed heads debating
you Harm me?. naaa. I’ve never had such doubt dude
but after this I’ll hurt myself. for knowing so much about you

whack fuck.

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lol niceeeee....... aint gott nuttin else but nice verse, really creative and good job. so yea.... thats it.

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im so ill that cancer thinks im its father.

one of the first textcees. when will you win ya fossil?
Mark always comes in 2nd. like the book does in the Gospels
^^
thanx, thats one less concept someone can use on me

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u know david. every time i see this it makes me laugh. thankz for being so creative. lol u cheered up my day.

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im so ill that cancer thinks im its father.