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04-23-06, 01:49 PM | #1 | |
Addicted
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Tha HighLife feat. Tha #1 Gunna
IP:
I left feed on
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...474&postcount=9 http://community.rapverse.com/showp...458&postcount=8 Hook = me & J Gunna verse = 1st 8 bars is me... 2nd 8 bars jo gunna hook 2nd verse = 1st 8 bars j gunna second is me http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3785119 |
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04-23-06, 04:37 PM | #2 | |
Whys That?
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IP:
playing..
hooks cool. first sector of the verse sounds a bit weird. good flow, but sound a bit robotic. hook again is cool like it. second verse flows a bit off at points, but its still cool, again the sound of your voice i dont liek too much. second dude sounds cool again. he held this track down. ok track. |
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04-24-06, 05:19 PM | #4 | ||
Nt Your Average
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IP:
I Like this beat,did you make it?
Hooks nice. Gunna:Flows gettin better,deliverys upped but still sounds a lil robotic if ya nah mean?koo lyrics emotion needs uppin....ridin the beat well Eckos on,much better delivery and flow,more fluent good emotion koo lyrics,feelin the presence yo....feelin how you flowin on it,you got a unique flow Hook........ Gunna...pretty much the same,change up your rhyme scheme a lil more though. Ecko..pretty much the same good shit overall:koo track feelin it 8/10 1
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04-24-06, 07:56 PM | #5 | |
OYD
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IP:
RTF please
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226539 What's hot: quality/mixing delivery on hook ecko...ur flow is good, but ur delivery is what carries you, along with your voice Who is this other cat on here? What's not: didn't remember lyrics in hook after I heard it Lyrics are lackluster for the most part Overall: Good sounding track that just leave a little to be desired lyric-wise. 1 |
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