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Old 04-29-06, 09:12 PM   #1
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Lightbulb ooooooooooo.."If you could be...MY VICTIM"...hot --ish...FOR YA MIXTAPES

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Beat: Perpetual Productions
Hook: Already on the beat
Verse 1 & 2: Q


**I borrowed a line from Biggie. "My mind's my nine, my pen's my mack 10" From "Playa's Anthem"



Concept: Braggadocio




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Old 04-29-06, 09:22 PM   #2
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aiight RTF..

like how you just get into beat spitting after Q mu fucka part. got good multi's. beat is dope tho. and hook part tight as hell too. and you fit in the biggie line in good place. But your flow was tight with the multi's. Some lines couldn't hear, but majority I could make out. and flow fell off one part I think, but no biggie. quality tho, still could up. but it's still better than majority of RV. but yea, good track. pc
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Old 04-29-06, 09:23 PM   #3
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*listening*

Flow at the beginning was a little shakey. I thought maybe it was the quality, but on second thought, it probably is the flow. It picks up quickly though.....Second verse is pretty straight as well. You probably have the best multi usage on this site. I like the way you put shit together.....it's unlike anyone else on here. Good shit
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Old 04-29-06, 10:45 PM   #4
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^^preciate da feed


and yea...I see the spots where the flow could be refined.



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Old 04-30-06, 08:30 PM   #5
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beat:8....kinda confusin but hot!!
flow:8.5...feelin it.......
lyrics: yea..u got sum nice multis man.....
overall:8.5....nice trakk!!
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Old 05-01-06, 04:53 AM   #6
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Old 05-01-06, 02:42 PM   #7
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i dunno bout this beat.. but you ridin it all day....damn this is a pretty quick flow.. and i only heard a couple fall offs...fuckin dickheads.. stick ya neckout i'll castrate.... i like the first four lines on the second verse the best... that shit was ill as fuck....except for a few fall offs this was really dope
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Old 05-02-06, 05:35 AM   #8
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^^haaa...the more I listen to this track, the more I realize it could have been even nicer had I re-rapped it.



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