http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227615
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heres a song i wrote up a few days ago......so drop some feed if you please and let me know what ya think...

www.betarecords.com/shear.kaughn

"Find a Way"

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Hello everyone

peepin now.....


beats veryyyyy laid back... R&B like... but wait...


vocals come in... flippin the way i thought the track would have went... kinda positive joint... flow is on beat .. but a lil choppy wit the delivery at spots on the first verse... 2nd verse is more fluid... much smoother untill " simple existence"... fell off a lil... but the hook is well put together... kinda catchy... like i said i wasnt expect a rap song off this.... 3rd verse... like this verse the best... its hot acca came off tight over the beat drop... hook again... yea man... this was aight....


you could work on... maybe pronounciation... cuz it seems you got a little problem wit pronouncin all your words fully... you get some shhh's ... and other such noises in the vocal... almost like a studder but not nearly as bad.... production wise... tight man... crisp...

7.5/10

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