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Old 05-16-06, 07:05 PM   #1
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Old 05-16-06, 08:02 PM   #2
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words for the hook aren't really clear....verse 1 starts out kinda sloppy flow wise. I liked the little part where you sped up ur flow/put in some multis a bit. flow on verse 2 is more on point. But overall the track seems rushed n' stuff, n' doesn't seem like the normal u to me. I suggest you rerecord this or somethin, cuz I think you could make it a lot better.
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Old 05-16-06, 08:03 PM   #3
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ok lets see

i liked the lyrics u had and the flow was aight

u make some pretty good stuff keep on making it.......

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Old 05-16-06, 09:59 PM   #4
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errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr up











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Old 05-16-06, 10:45 PM   #5
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OH SHIT.....

this beat sounds familiar... lol..... Dope flow over this.... you did your thing kid....

Hater proof no doubt...

delivery was on point and the hook was catchy as always...

solid 2 mins...






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Old 05-16-06, 10:57 PM   #6
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yes..i have heard this beat...but i can't put my finger on it damn it...i'll figure it out.....a youngblood one?..iono..but anyhizzle

alright flow is on point the whole way....voice is cool....
nice wordplay and delivery on tihs....

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Old 05-17-06, 07:54 AM   #7
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Word Bizzle... My bad forgot to peep this yestarday got a lil to tipsy... but it was all good...so i'ma peep this now....dope ass beat .. this is my typa beat right here...

Hook nice and simple catchy.. dope....
First Verse.. OOOH Couple Punches.. damn..like eight or so bar them multies where sickness...first verse=pretty good
Second Verse..yeah.. like that first line...like the second line... like the third line....i like this whole damn verse... ahhh... killen em....Second Verse=DEADLY....

yo i'ma d.l. this one.. dope shit q
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Old 05-17-06, 11:57 AM   #8
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Werd.Argghhh This Beat Owns....

Aight

Hooks Dope,Catchy,Delivered Well...

1st Verse:

Deliverys nice,feelin the energy,koo lyrics....flows koo,not your best but its a nice verse,felt your presence man,really stands out

2nd Verse:

Lyrics been upped haha,flows nice,feelin the delivery again...presence is nice again,yeah im feelin this verse,better than the last verse....

Overall:
Koo Track

8.5/10

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