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05-22-06, 10:45 AM
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Lyrical Exercise (Balla Talk) LEAVE LINKS
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4th one down on the soundclick page www.soundclick.com/eastsyde it was just a quick key up for me...leave links and i'll RTF
links: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2747990 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2747992 |
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05-23-06, 01:00 AM
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uppin..........
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05-24-06, 01:45 AM
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05-24-06, 03:11 AM
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IP:
u had some lines in here
the delievery is aiight .. but its ya cadence thats making me feel iffy about the track... flow was there... smoke more fags than a gay parade.... it was just coo to me ... ya feel me ... like nothin spectacular but it wasnt horrible either... i fucks with it ... just try to switch up ya voice ... some spots u sound a lil monotone... Fendi
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05-24-06, 11:13 AM
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IP:
appreciate the feed
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05-25-06, 03:00 PM
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uppin.................
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05-26-06, 02:27 AM
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i hardly ever get feed on here
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05-26-06, 01:08 PM
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05-26-06, 06:18 PM
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OYD
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needs a better title...think JAY Z
beat is slick-like Vocals are muffled...need better mixing or a new mic flow is kinda choppy, but your lyrics aren't bad some lines a tad contrived...But, not terrible... delivery is a tad monotonous...can tell you're reading in spots I'd suggest practicing your flow more before you record so that it'll flow more naturally. decent drop 1 |
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05-27-06, 12:46 AM
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yea i need a new mic this is true....i see what you're sayin on some parts...i'll work ok it appreciate the feed homie...
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05-29-06, 05:09 AM
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how u gona have bis in ya sig..and have paul wall on ur song???
beats ILL..my typa shit..ur come in was bad....lvl's to loud...flows ok..delevvery is decent @ best..emotion not their much..multis iight here...wut u might mean line was nice...ace of spades line nice, and fag line was iight..come out was kinda weak... keep droppin man
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05-29-06, 12:10 PM
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IP:
because i'ma open minded person.....i listen to EVERYTHING from paul wall to 2pac from canibus to wu tang from wu tang to UGK....i'm not just an east coast down south west coast fan i'ma an all around fan....thanks for the feed though i appreciate it....
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