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Old 05-31-06, 10:45 AM   #1
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NOw I know Nick would tell me I prolly should do it
But I gotta let them know that they rockin wit tha truest
They call me Chosen for a reason
I tell gurls I just got out tha shower they say that I'm teasin
most of these niggaz fake they should be arrested for treason
I ain't gotta say it know more ya'll know that I'm sick
And i ain't gotta show ya'll my wallet ya'll know that I'm rich
A harden thug comin right off tha streetz
I'm a beast on these beats, I ain't Miami but I stay wit tha heat
I'm tha Prince of tha South but I still rep for tha East
Virgina same block Iverson lived
Where niggaz sold drugs and where Iverson killed
Then a monster by tha name of Chosen was born
I ain't been hurt before but these streetz got me scorned
Still sellin birds and holdin nines standin on tha corner
Don't test my and my dawgs I been warned ya
So if you mess around and don't warn tha heed
(heed tha warning)
Nines will bust and blast and make you bleed
I'm tha Prince around here na I won't never leave
i'm 16 and tha Illest Rapper alive can't even mess wit me
So wit tha said I guess tha Illest Rapper alive is me
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Old 05-31-06, 10:51 AM   #2
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Got a couple questions who's "Chosen" and how are you the prince of the south but you rep for the east

But in other words this was real real newbish I mean you got potential you just need alot of elevation I mean you can't write shit on RV about stunting in cars and shit it just gone make people talk about you and shit but in other words elevate I'd give this a 3/10
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Old 05-31-06, 10:57 AM   #3
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well Chosen Is Me I only used tha Young Sin name cuz they wouldn't let me use Chosen and I'm from Va (Which is in tha south if you look at it) but I stay in Mississippi and this shit was just a lil sumthin na mean and if you wanna see sum other shit look up Tha Kid and that's my name to I spit tha punchlines for that azz verse... but chea... I really don't care long as I get feed from ya'll niggaz n advice.. n I know I need to elevate more hell everybody do
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Old 05-31-06, 11:01 AM   #4
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But you need it more than most people and one more thing rhyming the same 2 words want work on here
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Old 05-31-06, 11:06 AM   #5
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you goin by one lil peice mane I tell stories wit my rhymes Slick Rick'in it na mean tha other shit I just do to see where I'm at... Go To Freestylehq.com and see about that duke name Killa Skillz (my old name) and you'll know what I am.. but I see what you sayin mane
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