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Old 06-11-06, 09:57 AM   #1
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Old 06-11-06, 10:04 AM   #2
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Old 06-14-06, 12:22 PM   #3
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Old 06-14-06, 04:14 PM   #4
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i went ten


you shoulda lost last week...

im incredible, its inevitable im one step ahead of you
thats picture perfect rhyming^
like the kid i should be clowning instead of you
You were NEVER good, and youll never set sails, duke
'Cos the peak of ya game'll just be where i impale you
better hail duke, found u out and your old names
figured your alias must vice versa cos i heard u go both ways
your no legend killer, your never flexing a vet...
theres a 9 next your name...
... now whatch me put one next to your head
SPuL's such a loser that he baught his chors...
and he capitalized the L... just to support the cause
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Old 06-15-06, 11:27 AM   #5
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aiight fine...

Whoever wins, goes to the contendership, but kid, you're going down
Cuz I bring that hotshh<--- while that's just who you wont face next round
This fatty's life is like the LBL. Clearly you can tell
Cuz even if he drop a LB or 2... he still gon be left with the L!
I only hear Monsier, whenever I go to France and choose to dine
I ain't saying you off the hook<--- I'm just placing you infront of mine!
Get your mind involved in it, son. This the time to prove what you about
...Mine's ^^^^ in brainstorm season...
........ ... while mon's is obviously in the midst of an eternal drought!
Watch me rip this fag up quickly. It'll surely be a sight
Cuz we all know monsier to lose...and I ain't trying to be polite!
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Old 06-15-06, 06:20 PM   #6
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read it.. wasn't sure, so here's the line 4 line bdown,

mon

im incredible, its inevitable im one step ahead of you
thats picture perfect rhyming^
like the kid i should be clowning instead of you
i HATE these kinda lines, unless there unbelievably clever... "blah blah blah, [insert other persons name] cuz thats who i shuld be battling"... so, no
You were NEVER good, and youll never set sails, duke
'Cos the peak of ya game'll just be where i impale you
ehh, ok
better hail duke, found u out and your old names
figured your alias must vice versa cos i heard u go both ways
ehh, no
your no legend killer, your never flexing a vet...
theres a 9 next your name...
... now whatch me put one next to your head
ok.. that was ok..
SPuL's such a loser that he baught his chors...
and he capitalized the L... just to support the cause
ehhh, nah

spul

Whoever wins, goes to the contendership, but kid, you're going down
Cuz I bring that hotshh<--- while that's just who you wont face next round
AHHH!!!! noooo
This fatty's life is like the LBL. Clearly you can tell
Cuz even if he drop a LB or 2... he still gon be left with the L!
no
I only hear Monsier, whenever I go to France and choose to dine
I ain't saying you off the hook<--- I'm just placing you infront of mine!
i think this may'v one it.. even tho its not that great,
Get your mind involved in it, son. This the time to prove what you about
...Mine's ^^^^ in brainstorm season...
........ ... while mon's is obviously in the midst of an eternal drought!
ehh, not really
Watch me rip this fag up quickly. It'll surely be a sight
Cuz we all know monsier to lose...and I ain't trying to be polite
definitly not

they both used that "name/i shuld be battling instead of u".... mons was better, 2nd lines were almost equal.. mons was alittle better...3rd line, spuL thus far had line of the battle... the 9 next to ur head was simple, but i think more impactful than spuls 4th bar... both closers were bad.

damn, close.. was gonna giv it to spul...but

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Old 06-15-06, 11:38 AM   #7
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im incredible, its inevitable im one step ahead of you
thats picture perfect rhyming^
like the kid i should be clowning instead of you
You were NEVER good, and youll never set sails, duke
'Cos the peak of ya game'll just be where i impale you
better hail duke, found u out and your old names
figured your alias must vice versa cos i heard u go both ways
your no legend killer, your never flexing a vet...
theres a 9 next your name...
... now whatch me put one next to your head
SPuL's such a loser that he baught his chors...
and he capitalized the L... just to support the cause

vs

This fatty's life is like the LBL. Clearly you can tell
Cuz even if he drop a LB or 2... he still gon be left with the L!
I only hear Monsier, whenever I go to France and choose to dine
I ain't saying you off the hook<--- I'm just placing you infront of mine!

I think Mon got this off of creativity wit his lines....it was a str8 battle and both broaght personals....I also learned Spul was Vice Versa according to mon but thats on the side...
keep it up....

V/Monswatever...
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Old 06-15-06, 11:40 AM   #8
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lol @ vice versa? who th efuck is that?
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Old 06-15-06, 11:43 AM   #9
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guess that wasn't u huh? I didn't really think so cuz u was both on at the same time way back and he was str8 garbage....its just since he had that line about him on here and said he found all ur aliases or some shit....
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Old 06-15-06, 11:44 AM   #10
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oh word. that ain't me tho. but thanks for vote. upppp
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Old 06-15-06, 11:49 AM   #11
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im incredible, its inevitable im one step ahead of you
thats picture perfect rhyming^
like the kid i should be clowning instead of you

^^cool personal

You were NEVER good, and youll never set sails, duke
'Cos the peak of ya game'll just be where i impale you

^^err aight

better hail duke, found u out and your old names
figured your alias must vice versa cos i heard u go both ways

^^ha this wascool

your no legend killer, your never flexing a vet...
theres a 9 next your name...
... now whatch me put one next to your head

^^nah kinda played 9 punches...coulda been creative

SPuL's such a loser that he baught his chors...
and he capitalized the L... just to support the cause

^^this was cool

vs

Spul

Whoever wins, goes to the contendership, but kid, you're going down
Cuz I bring that hotshh<--- while that's just who you wont face next round

^^aight same as your opponent...cool opener personal

This fatty's life is like the LBL. Clearly you can tell
Cuz even if he drop a LB or 2... he still gon be left with the L!

^^alright decent

I only hear Monsier, whenever I go to France and choose to dine
I ain't saying you off the hook<--- I'm just placing you infront of mine!

^nice feeling it

Get your mind involved in it, son. This the time to prove what you about
...Mine's ^^^^ in brainstorm season...
........ ... while mon's is obviously in the midst of an eternal drought!

^^lol ok

Watch me rip this fag up quickly. It'll surely be a sight
Cuz we all know monsier to lose...and I ain't trying to be polite!

^^ya i thought this was pretty dope

close battle...monsieur had a nice verse ..up and down...spul had my favorite line... and a more consistent verse...close ass battle

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Old 06-15-06, 12:17 PM   #12
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im incredible, its inevitable im one step ahead of you
thats picture perfect rhyming^
like the kid i should be clowning instead of you
SPuL's such a loser that he baught his chors...
and he capitalized the L... just to support the cause

vs

Whoever wins, goes to the contendership, but kid, you're going down
Cuz I bring that hotshh<--- while that's just who you wont face next round
This fatty's life is like the LBL. Clearly you can tell
Cuz even if he drop a LB or 2... he still gon be left with the L!
Get your mind involved in it, son. This the time to prove what you about
...Mine's ^^^^ in brainstorm season...
........ ... while mon's is obviously in the midst of an eternal drought!
Watch me rip this fag up quickly. It'll surely be a sight
Cuz we all know monsier to lose...and I ain't trying to be polite!

Spul clearly took this ..But Monsieur had an Ok Drop

Dude keeps getting better every week...look out 4 M in the League

But spul came kinda simple again this week and still walked away with it

That shits gonna stop soon Spullizle ..lol

good Battle ya..Keep it up

V/Spul.....
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Old 06-15-06, 12:27 PM   #13
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you shoulda lost last week...

im incredible, its inevitable im one step ahead of you
thats picture perfect rhyming^
like the kid i should be clowning instead of you
You were NEVER good, and youll never set sails, duke
'Cos the peak of ya game'll just be where i impale you
better hail duke, found u out and your old names
figured your alias must vice versa cos i heard u go both ways
your no legend killer, your never flexing a vet...
theres a 9 next your name...
... now whatch me put one next to your head
SPuL's such a loser that he baught his chors...
and he capitalized the L... just to support the cause

vs


Whoever wins, goes to the contendership, but kid, you're going down
Cuz I bring that hotshh<--- while that's just who you wont face next round
This fatty's life is like the LBL. Clearly you can tell
Cuz even if he drop a LB or 2... he still gon be left with the L!
I only hear Monsier, whenever I go to France and choose to dine
I ain't saying you off the hook<--- I'm just placing you infront of mine!
Get your mind involved in it, son. This the time to prove what you about
...Mine's ^^^^ in brainstorm season...
........ ... while mon's is obviously in the midst of an eternal drought!
Watch me rip this fag up quickly. It'll surely be a sight
Cuz we all know monsier to lose...and I ain't trying to be polite!


vote: monsiuer by a hair if that.....

i thought spul had more played diss/punches that was useless or just was hitting for me...
monsiuer had hes fair share of weak punches and played personal but they did hit slight better i thought...
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Old 06-15-06, 02:28 PM   #14
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im incredible, its inevitable im one step ahead of you
thats picture perfect rhyming^
like the kid i should be clowning instead of you
better hail duke, found u out and your old names
figured your alias must vice versa cos i heard u go both ways
SPuL's such a loser that he baught his chors...
and he capitalized the L... just to support the cause

vs

Whoever wins, goes to the contendership, but kid, you're going down
Cuz I bring that hotshh<--- while that's just who you wont face next round
I only hear Monsier, whenever I go to France and choose to dine
I ain't saying you off the hook<--- I'm just placing you infront of mine!
Get your mind involved in it, son. This the time to prove what you about
...Mine's ^^^^ in brainstorm season...
........ ... while mon's is obviously in the midst of an eternal drought!


damn, this is a close one...both had some cool lines...i liked mons opener bettere than spuls version of it...

but over all spul had way mopre creative concepts..

like...mon;s vice versa line didnt hit as hard as it couldve...maybe its jus me

i like sPul's style more

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Old 06-15-06, 02:45 PM   #15
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this was an aight battle...

mons

im incredible, its inevitable im one step ahead of you
thats picture perfect rhyming^
like the kid i should be clowning instead of you
better hail duke, found u out and your old names
figured your alias must vice versa cos i heard u go both ways
SPuL's such a loser that he baught his chors...
and he capitalized the L... just to support the cause

3

spul

Whoever wins, goes to the contendership, but kid, you're going down
Cuz I bring that hotshh<--- while that's just who you wont face next round
Watch me rip this fag up quickly. It'll surely be a sight
Cuz we all know monsier to lose...and I ain't trying to be polite!

2

i got mons winnin this with one more quotable...

was close though good battle both.

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