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06-20-06, 02:20 PM
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06-21-06, 06:49 AM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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lol @ "dishes in their kitchen"...hmm I wonder what THAT was about...
 haa neway beat is knockin ur delivery was hot out the gate, then it broke down quickly...flow leveled out...but was consistent M.I. lyrics sounded personal...and they were delivered well...flow was acceptable I like the sound of this track. 1 |
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06-21-06, 11:16 AM
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this is deep...
Beat: i love that chick doin that shit wit her voice over the beat cho... flow killin it... caught the personal lines up in there... nice delivery of real issues.. for real... solid kid... hook: flows ill... yall did it here man MI... damn ... i love the lyrical content you bringin man... shit from the heart like... damn... flows a step up and delivery is coo to... DL'in this when i get home... this shit was krazy solid yall solid
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06-21-06, 01:55 PM
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Aighhhh....Beats nice
Cho...feelin ya flow real nice....madd upped it,falls off once,but i think this fast flow really suits you man....Good emotion,could be upped but i like it its laid back....Lyrics nice....feelin em,deliverys koo...werd Hook..too low couldnt understand it MI Word....flows nice,really feelin your delivery man....emotions koo....wow@how much you spittin and not losin your breath...are you like a superhuman or summin?lol...word up i love your delivery...real strong but at the same time it dont seem forced...word Chos second verse is better than his first i think.real nice feelin the lyrics more too...koo verse homie...we need to collab again Wow it went off pretty weird Other than that good shit Keep up Can You RTF here plz http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230362
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06-21-06, 02:24 PM
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i love this kanye song......your flow is really starting to hit, n your lyrics were always there.....mi lyrics are really deep....only advice would be to make ya stuff a lil more clear....like your voice at points its hard to hear what you say....but bothyall did a real good job....really good twist on this beat......i enjoyed
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06-22-06, 07:25 AM
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The Alien Toung
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no doubt..........good deal thx pl
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06-23-06, 12:57 AM
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lol beat is weird as fuck...but i like it...
cho...your flow is better on this track.....i think faster paced track may be your thing...lyrics are nice as usual... delivery is good...hook comes in...you cant really notice its a hook at first....but its coo...could stand to be a bit more catchy.... 2nd dude...delivery is nice....lyrics are coo.....nothin really wrong with this verse...u could switch ya delivery every once in a while....u stay with that..."ima eat you" delivery the whole time lol... 3rd verse is coo.... overall this was a solid track......im thinkin cho might be better on the faster shit for real rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230444
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06-24-06, 06:11 PM
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Hell yeah
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beat is really dope
quality is not bad, pretty good flow is ill,perfect man wheres this beat from? pretty dope mmm did your vocal went down? dope track, your best ive heard so far |
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06-24-06, 11:13 PM
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thx ppl............im gettin @ yall now !
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06-30-06, 12:49 PM
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^'n man.................i usualy dont dubble minez but this was a ill joint man............some deepness real talk !
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