word, Jay Murdah who go here, i'm coo with dude. But uhh dude from his school saw my myspace took shot @ me randomly dissed me, so this reply back. so just know uh:

-he 13 yrs old, tries to rap gangsta about poppin' shells and shit
-On Jay's dick BIG TIME
-Name is Qwan rap name is Carnage black
-Lives in philly

basically....

www.soundclick.com/spul

Intro: Triple_N
First verse: SPuL
Hook: Triple_N
Second verse: SPuL
Beat: "What Goes Around" By Lloyd Banks ft. 50 Cent

LINKS:
1.http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228324
2. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229730

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Yo before I listen I hope you rtf unlike the last billion times ...

beat is str8 and bumpin...intro is nice.and SpuL you vocals a lil low...but im feelin your delivery, nice cocky and light hearted..lyrics are good too...hook is crazy too..2nd verse is better punches decent..haha ray charles line is nice..emotion is nice..u cant do a drive by with yo mom in the car haha lol..haa this lil diss track is hot...trip hit tha hook up real tight...nice jawn 9/10

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230623

can you please return the favor???

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My Myspace
My Soundclick

N.O.K

Konvict - Cold World (Video)

SpuL - 10/10
Shere Kaughn - 10/10
Speats - 20/10
and more

QUEENS TO BROOKLYN ALL DAY FT TRIPLE N

*listening*


neva heard something from spul b4 i guess...anyways nice choice on the beat..u got a nice voice and i'm likeing ur flows quite a lot..punches r cool so far..hahaha mayne the hook is so lively..yeah i like this shit!!...i like the 'pr' stuff..lol..tight one here...yeah i enjoyed this...



hit my sig and rft...thanx

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^aiight i promise I got y'all when I get back from my driving time. but thanks for feed.

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y u need trip on this?

but yea...trip is mixed down really nice, hook works - ur verses r a little low, and not as clear, sum EQ'ing issues, the dissing and lyrics are solid, a couple of extra syllables here and there...overall its a track well done, wudda been pro if all atthe same level of sound quality..

bless

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beat is pretty cool, spul gets in nice, flow is pretty dope, quality is not bad too,mm you seem like reading off some paper a lil bit, am I right?you need to feel more confortable, hook is pretty dope, quality is pretty good,second verse still comes in nice, pretty dope verse ,i prefer this one, word at this track, dope lyrics and all, good looking, holla back when youll have a new track

^aiight thanks to you too for feed. uppin....

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hol up


am I being dissed in this track?





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lol are you 13? lol

but haha thanks for feed same to you PT

oh, and to answer your question, well he basically is dude who helps me the most with my audio. So I guess you could say that. but word...

uppppp

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alright i'm listening now

the beat is hot

nice intro

I like it..i think that your vocals were a tad low....but tight flow and tight voice..i like this..good punches..

Hot Flow on the hook by triple.......

his vocals were just right........

second verse...vocals were a lil louder...i like this a lot more....sounds good

looks like you hittum hard...

keep it up

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not sure I'm big on your gratuitous use of the word "faggot"

but...neway

beat is butt...stank...chitlin...collard green FUNKY

ugh

Spul...I'm not being offensive, but, is Triple N your mentor?


1st verse...flow was on...levels cud be a touch louder

Hook sounds good...like the ad libs on it

2nd verse...delivery is on

Lyrics...seem coo...To be honest, I wasn't paying that much attention to them...I tend to listen more for flow/delivery/rhymes/etc


good drop


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playing...

beats ok, trips intro sound good.

vocals are very low, could do with a slight up. flows good, lyrics are cool.Dubs and adlibs are good.

Hooks cool, nice multis in it.

Second verse is cool. But yeh, couldnt really focus seen as its a diss to a 13 year old kid on the net.

ahaha.

Should of just jizzed on him


Hit up - I cant wait-

^thanks for feed. I got you, just need to make a trip out quickly. then i got you...

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returing the feed on the battle track i forgot i had posted...haha....but all feed is apprieated, so theeeeeeeeeee song now....

k i liked the whole flow of it all n i didnt pay much attention to they lyrics but right off the bat ima tell you you need to up your vocals, and you sound a lil over compressed, it makes your quality seem way behind triple n which is making the song seem like it doesnt mesh too good....but i also left feed on your text battle haha, ie i owned the kid

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