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07-14-06, 01:39 PM
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I see dumb people
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NEW SPUL!! "Infatuated" word up, getting the pimp on :cool:
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word up, bout time I delivered another slow jam.
 www.soundclick.com/spul Hook: some dude lol First verse: SPuL Second verse: SPuL Third verse: SPuL LINKS: 1. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230714 2. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231491 |
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07-14-06, 02:51 PM
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I see dumb people
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07-14-06, 03:01 PM
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nope, sorry kon........... up
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07-14-06, 03:34 PM
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That to me fam?.... anyways listenin.. Yeah this thta memphis bleek jawn righ..im def feelin it..lets see what the remix king gon do haha whats good.. Energy is real nice for this track and delivery is working because its jumpy and nice for the beat... I can hear most of what youre saying sum shit I cudnt hear but its pretty good articulation all tha way thru... Lyrics are def good for this, a mainstream jawn nah mean...multis are working and I like how had a harmony on some of the lyrics... If Memph didn't do this I could see a big joint out of this.. Qual hot too fam... 1
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07-14-06, 03:27 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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ok...u took me back with this beat...flow is koo..you changed it up...delivery is laidback, sum words u coulda delivered better but nothign major on verse 1...hook...yea u kno its tight..verse 2....flow sounded like verse 1 halfway u speed it up...but its jus a more rapid version of same flow....emotion is better faster better...but pronounciation suffers a bit, verse 3 still rolling wit same flow...same flaws as other verses....biggest probs was flow needed a change up...emotion coulda been stronger...not saying get more hype but fluctuate ya words better an convey that flirtatious vibe u was going better...u sounded like u was jus strait rappin wasn't really getting at ladies way u shoulda....but all in all its a good track....jus needs touching up....1
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07-14-06, 03:57 PM
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^word thanks to both. appreciate it. pppppppp
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07-14-06, 05:49 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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Im not 1 for buttery tracks lol
but i was feelin the hook and shit it was catchy..sounds like some radio type shit u came iight...coulda pronounced some shit better good quality..nice laid back hawaii chillin type flow lol we gotta collab,,, good track bro
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07-14-06, 07:06 PM
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^word appreciate the feed man. and def we could upp
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07-14-06, 11:02 PM
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07-15-06, 12:47 AM
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07-15-06, 03:49 PM
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07-16-06, 11:39 PM
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