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Old 07-19-06, 07:17 PM   #1
wiley d
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something about you

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unknown chorus

i love you so much it makes my **eyes~wet**,
from the first time i saw you you made my **eyes~lit** ,
you always worried about me cheating telling me not to **try~sh*t** ,
but am i player cause of how much females a **guy~gets**,
you be looking in my phone thinking i got **side~chicks** ,
i dont mean to worry you cause i want you to be my**bride**,
but you act like im not worried when your friend with other **guys**,
you say i dont listen to you cause all im hearing is **lies**,
the days you be messing with ya ex is probably the same night you ask me to rub your **thighs**,
i be messing with other girls cause i want practice so i can f**k you **right**,
i want to get all over your body like a misquito **bite**,
and make you scream so loud you'd be thinking about it for **nights**,
and im scared to love just like fat people are afraid of **heights**,
so i might say escuses like your too young or your not my **type**,
everyday i think about what besides my face about me do you** like**,
and i think about is this love or lust the reason your in my **life**


unknown chorus

i think love is like aliens cause it cant be **true**,
cause my relationships are like fixing stuff cause i only want to **screw**,
niggas saying im whipped like slavery days cause they starting to see a **change**,
and i got to admit im scared to love because love is like death because it always brings you **pain**
im addicted to you like pheens are addicted to **cocaine**
there is something about you that makes me wait near the phone like im expecting a **gold~ chain**
she be thinking like gum commercial saying we is going to **last~long**
but i aint going to lie shes the wifey type and i think about her everytime i hear a **sad~song**
love is like life cause it **dont~last**
but im tired and i dont want to see another perfect girl for me **go~past**
so either love or lust im still going to **try**
but hopefully it wont end up turning into a song that puts a tear into my **eye**








is this lust
cause its something about you
is it love
or do i just wanna fuck you
is this lust
cause its something about you
is it love
or do i just wanna fuck you
is this lust
cause its something about you
is it love
or do i just wanna fuck you

Last edited by wiley d : 07-20-06 at 02:01 PM.
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Old 07-19-06, 10:25 PM   #2
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this was good the conent not bad bu ti would have to hear it in audio bu tit had good emotion you can picture a lot of this keep them coming for real homey try elevate your vocab a little
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Old 07-20-06, 02:00 PM   #3
wiley d
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good looking out on the feedback

but i need more feedback
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Old 07-20-06, 02:05 PM   #4
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wileys a grime head.

drop the *****'s
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Old 07-20-06, 02:09 PM   #5
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are you trying to insult me,cause we can finish this in a freestyle battle,and get off my nuts im new to this site i dont need an enemy already
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Old 07-20-06, 02:17 PM   #6
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lmao, stfu.

I gave you advice to drop the ***'s cause they make you look shit.
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Old 07-20-06, 02:21 PM   #7
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oh my fault ,but you stfu ,and what does grime head mean
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Old 07-20-06, 02:23 PM   #8
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grime is a category of music.

garage/hiphop mix.

big in the UK and wiley is a respected grime artist.
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Old 07-20-06, 02:25 PM   #9
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Old 07-20-06, 02:26 PM   #10
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oh i feel you,much respect and good lookin on the feedback,
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Old 07-20-06, 03:07 PM   #11
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