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07-27-06, 12:58 PM | #1 | |
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Fuck Blue Hefner
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wen i spray my gat ya back collapse dude u aint shit but a bitch who sweat my dick wen its time 2 rhyme i dont waste my time i just paste a line and erase ya kind take off ya thong cuz ya cant write a song dat was just a quick verse i didnt have 2 curse just qunch my thurst
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07-27-06, 01:01 PM | #2 | |
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alright man work on ur structure to me this just seemed to simple and plain nothin stood out work on ur vovab also and jus keep droppin shit to get better
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07-27-06, 01:03 PM | #3 | |||
Zar Bi-Shup
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- No personals
- No pattern - No flow - No structure 1/10
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08-01-06, 01:17 AM | #4 | ||
Within Eternity's Wither
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Another pointless read.....
...no hate...
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08-01-06, 01:17 PM | #5 | |
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Yo this wuz not worth doing because u juss embarrassed yourself with a very pointless and Ignorant rhyme or wut eva its wuzz well this had no structure no flow wutsoeva no hate on the boy but go to the tutorails get ya skillz up than try again untill than this wuz very weak and a non hitting diss mostlikely u must be hatin on blue hefner well ...done...1...
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