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07-30-06, 02:23 PM | #1 | ||
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Tag Battle - JTR & SPuL vs Nick Fletcher & Untold
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07-30-06, 02:34 PM | #2 | |
Skadoosh!
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Check faggots....
... what it is! Let's go 36 lines per team, 18 per person. LINKS Yeah, because Untold is too busy to vote... I will just be voting on 8 battles instead of 4 to make up for his absence. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232566 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232567 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232553 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232559 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232552 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232570 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232574 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232582 Last edited by Nick Fletcher. : 08-04-06 at 10:57 PM. |
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07-30-06, 04:04 PM | #3 | |
Skadoosh!
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Right, here it is.
Nick: Ok, I peeped the tag final.. and with similar styles I don't know who the worse is Lama & Philly's biting claims were bullshit.. .. but SPuL and Jack could claim bullshit with both their verses The fact is that match was false.. and this is where the heat sparks 'Coz if SPuL really was biting jokes, then Jack'd be covered in teeth marks But yo, my man SPuL is old school.. you been doin this shit for a while Hell, I'll go as far as to say Jurassic emcee.. .. simply because its clear that's about when you found ure style I won't scare fools with ya pics.. instead both y'all can catch a set of fists 'Coz this is all out war.. .. which explains why I'm battling Tony Blair's son and a terrorist And don't say its played to shit, SPuL.. fact is the truth can kill Not to mention 3 days ago you dropped benadict wordplay.. AND thought it was ILL. Let's talk about ya partner though.. simply put this dudes a lame So watch me fuck jack up, with enough jabs to have him doing the same I'm violent in battle.. so Jack, prepare for a thumpin G.. 'Coz I'll give you the cingular most hardcore beating, it'll crush every phone company I know SPuL has gotta talk about L.I.. how I didn't vote him in the Legends class I apologise.. I'd feel the same way as you but.. .. my bad back prevents me from gettin down low enough to KISS HIS ASS! You can shut up to Jack! The fact is ure gettin smacked to the mat And I'm sorry to say that you suck.. .. but what's worse is SPuL tells me you're not even good at that Untold: these hoes are wack @ text, 'n sorry nick, i know i kept ya waitin but its so hard to find info.. ..on these two nobodies that were facin i'm racin, tryin to get this shit done mad quick 'n when i bust banana clips @ ya spine.. ..i'll leave it lookin like it's doin back splits ya wack kids, i have shit to say to both these fagz s'when i take a crack @ battlin ya'll.. it'll be both of ya'llz backs i'm focused on tact, but kids on this team cant cop winz s'when they heard it was a tag match.. ..they both hurried and scream'd "Not 'IT'!" Spul, ya nuttin homie, so i'll kill all of Jack's cronies instead of cuttin ur ham string.. i'd rather break ur bologna phonies, like these two pussies who are known for droppin rotten but i see ur verses match ya sex life how they switch from top to bottom plus these fags aint writers, both are known hoes as biters but Spul jacks Jack so much.. ..they could become the gay version of Winona Ryder i'm a fighter, don't get my punches, then take the loss cuz its not that we don't get UR punches.. just ur fists are soft 'n Spul's a fool, whose popularity has found'a regression so if Spul's the legend killer.. i guess suicide's out'a the question pz, dude Last edited by Nick Fletcher. : 08-03-06 at 10:23 PM. |
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07-31-06, 05:27 PM | #4 | ||
I see dumb people
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prepare to get jizzed on, that is all
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08-03-06, 12:29 AM | #5 | ||
I see dumb people
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1st verse = Jack, 2nd = SPuL, 3rd = Jack, 4th = SPuL
King Solo a.k.a Nick Fletcher: This battle must be starwars themed, when this mad-homo gets tossed It's cuz SPuL will Leia princess out, and Jack will hand-solo the loss So bring ya boys in, don't matter, me and SPuL will destroy them Since you're arsenic, & ya verse has the same affect on readers as the poisin I'm hard with action, ready to rip the flesh off ya bones then start the bashin' Cuz I skinheads, and i'll give Nicca beating like I was part of the faction Ya verse blows bitch, "watch and learn?" nah fuck this hoes spit Only thing his text taught me was how to stretch ...was that a diss or a manual for arobics? You said you'd beat us? I'll battle for cash cuz everything you say is shit So Nick, put your money where your mouth is and pay my dick I'm knockin' Nick's face in so far, that I bet he'll be dyin', dude My fist to his skull will create such a huge Smash... ... that pepsi might try and sue Your style is soo outdated, Nick... and I don't mean to bitch But... your lines are stretched so far out, it'd make a hippie start to trip! You think you could merk us all, but your arrogance is payin' it's toll, bitch Cuz of course cher's known to son....... ny as the bitch he rolled with Y'all make a horrible team. I'll make a statement to make it official "You're wack NFU"... and I ain't talkin' about your combined initials Ya text is shit. With played lines, you don't threaten me slut Cuz we'll see that verse in the bathroom... ... and it still won't be freshenin' up! Met-A-4 a.k.a Un-Told: Jacks hit rating is high, cuz I drop bombs like a tank b While Mets hit rating is so low ...it has all of New York routing for the Yankee's Switched the alias, but it suits you whenever you're on net Cuz you make a dash in your name, and make a dash away from any contest You compliment my style, but d/r won't save you from gettin whored dead I can tell I made a good impression on you ...with the dent I left in ya forehead You fags do some nasty shit, don't expect this merking to be utter soft I just hope y'all ATLEAST wear blindfolds & imagine you're girls …when ya jerk eachother off! Met-a-4? Who the fuck is this? You must be an unknown in this game cuz I tried to figure out the story of Untold<---and came to a conclusion, that's just what it was Tryin' to rise up the ranks against me? I'm sorry, you ain't goin' far b Cuz the way I'm droppin' bombs on UN... ... I could cause a World War 3! Son, you should go find a ghostwriter. Be quick to pay a bitch Cuz your verses are religious lacking, that you could consider them atheist I'll consider your face as my punching bag. I'm vicious. Fuck being humble I'll send such a huge blow to your temple<--- even the ones in India will start to crumble! EZ, Bitchez! Last edited by SPuL™ : 08-03-06 at 12:10 PM. |
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08-03-06, 01:35 AM | #6 | |
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Lol, I said upping cuz I posted my verse, but then I was like nah wtf? And went on SPuL's account and dropped my verse in his post, and then I went back on mine and edited out the verse and I didn't know what else to say. STFU!!! I'm confusing myself, bah!
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08-03-06, 11:00 AM | #7 | ||
Met-A-4
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uppin what?
nigga i haven't dropped yet! the fuck out'a here with that shit!
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08-03-06, 12:11 PM | #8 | ||
I see dumb people
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^lmao so stfu and drop son!
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08-03-06, 10:06 PM | #9 | ||
Met-A-4
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yo, i got my verse but nick's offline.
so to let ya'll know i'm not late or no showin, nick's gonna have my verse till he drops it. plus, i'm out for a trip, so i'll vote on ALL the battlez next week or try to find time to vote on battles this week. sorry. pz.
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08-03-06, 10:24 PM | #10 | |
Skadoosh!
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Shit is done, dropped. Now waiting for votes. And don't worry about voting Met... I'll just fucking vote on 8 battles and shit.
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08-04-06, 04:43 AM | #11 | ||
10:23 till i'm 86
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The fact is that match was false.. and this is where the heat sparks
'Coz if SPuL really was biting jokes, then Jack'd be covered in teeth marks I won't scare fools with ya pics.. instead both y'all can catch a set of fists 'Coz this is all out war.. .. which explains why I'm battling Tony Blair's son and a terrorist And don't say its played to shit, SPuL.. fact is the truth can kill Not to mention 3 days ago you dropped benadict wordplay.. AND thought it was ILL. I'm violent in battle.. so Jack, prepare for a thumpin G.. 'Coz I'll give you the cingular most hardcore beating, it'll crush every phone company ..and.. i'm focused on tact, but kids on this team cant cop winz s'when they heard it was a tag match.. ..they both hurried and scream'd "Not 'IT'!"' n Spul's a fool, whose popularity has found'a regression so if Spul's the legend killer.. i guess suicide's out'a the question (6) total vs. Ya verse blows bitch, "watch and learn?" nah fuck this hoes spit Only thing his text taught me was how to stretch ...was that a diss or a manual for arobics? ^^ worded a bit odd Your style is soo outdated, Nick... and I don't mean to bitch But... your lines are stretched so far out, it'd make a hippie start to trip! Ya text is shit. With played lines, you don't threaten me slut Cuz we'll see that verse in the bathroom... ... and it still won't be freshenin' up! ..and.. You compliment my style, but d/r won't save you from gettin whored dead I can tell I made a good impression on you ...with the dent I left in ya forehead ^^no this sucked, but didn't i just read this somewhere else? Met-a-4? Who the fuck is this? You must be an unknown in this game cuz I tried to figure out the story of Untold<---and came to a conclusion, that's just what it was Tryin' to rise up the ranks against me? I'm sorry, you ain't goin' far b Cuz the way I'm droppin' bombs on UN... ... I could cause a World War 3! I'll consider your face as my punching bag. I'm vicious. Fuck being humble I'll send such a huge blow to your temple<--- even the ones in India will start to crumble! (6)total .. i got this at a tie but i think spul is a fag and jtr mighta bit or recycled and also i thought that one line was worded poorly.. and untold u came a lil weaker than the rest just to point that out.... anyway, good battle could go either way .. vote- nick and untold
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08-04-06, 05:18 AM | #12 | |
Skadoosh!
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^ LMAO!! @ this guy... *dies*
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08-04-06, 10:37 AM | #13 | ||
I see dumb people
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^lmao that possibly can't count. For him saying it's a tie, then saying I'm a fag as a reason why he voted. =/
and also for reason I IMed you yesterday. pshh... w/e.. 1-0 I guess and i think he got quotes wrong. 12 for them, 14 for us. unless i'm blind lol Last edited by SPuL™ : 08-04-06 at 10:45 AM. |
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08-04-06, 11:03 AM | #14 | ||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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Nick Fletcher 1 Ok, I peeped the tag final.. and with similar styles I don't know who the worse is Lama & Philly's biting claims were bullshit.. .. but SPuL and Jack could claim bullshit with both their verses 2 The fact is that match was false.. and this is where the heat sparks 'Coz if SPuL really was biting jokes, then Jack'd be covered in teeth marks But yo, my man SPuL is old school.. you been doin this shit for a while Hell, I'll go as far as to say Jurassic emcee.. .. simply because its clear that's about when you found ure style AND 3 I know SPuL has gotta talk about L.I.. how I didn't vote him in the Legends class I apologise.. I'd feel the same way as you but.. .. my bad back prevents me from gettin down low enough to KISS HIS ASS! 4 You can shut up to Jack! The fact is ure gettin smacked to the mat And I'm sorry to say that you suck.. .. but what's worse is SPuL tells me you're not even good at that Untold 5 phonies, like these two pussies who are known for droppin rotten but i see ur verses match ya sex life how they switch from top to bottom AND '6 n Spul's a fool, whose popularity has found'a regression so if Spul's the legend killer.. i guess suicide's out'a the question JTR 1 This battle must be starwars themed, when this mad-homo gets tossed It's cuz SPuL will Leia princess out, and Jack will hand-solo the loss AND 2 I'm hard with action, ready to rip the flesh off ya bones then start the bashin' Cuz I skinheads, and i'll give Nicca beating like I was part of the faction AND 3 Jacks hit rating is high, cuz I drop bombs like a tank b While Mets hit rating is so low ...it has all of New York routing for the Yankee's AND 4 You compliment my style, but d/r won't save you from gettin whored dead I can tell I made a good impression on you ...with the dent I left in ya forehead 5 You fags do some nasty shit, don't expect this merking to be utter soft I just hope y'all ATLEAST wear blindfolds & imagine you're girls …when ya jerk eachother off! SPUL None really. This battle was good but Obviously NF and JTR held it together the most. Nick had some really stretched lines but his shit had a lot of good punches here and there. Untold dropped some decent shit but it wasn't his usual style and his punches didn't really hit too hard, and I think he recycled that cracking back line. JTR had some good shit too. And his structure was a lil better then Nicks. SPUL...I honestly didn't like his verse at all . He had one line that I thought was decent but it really wasn't that hot to help the team out. His structure made it a bit hard to read and his punches were a bit played out. All in All this was a good tag battle from both sides, But Im going to give this one to Nick Fletcher & Untold. V/ Untold Fletcher Team. |
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08-04-06, 05:57 PM | #15 | |
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The fact is that match was false.. and this is where the heat sparks
'Coz if SPuL really was biting jokes, then Jack'd be covered in teeth marks I won't scare fools with ya pics.. instead both y'all can catch a set of fists 'Coz this is all out war.. .. which explains why I'm battling Tony Blair's son and a terrorist i'm focused on tact, but kids on this team cant cop winz s'when they heard it was a tag match.. ..they both hurried and scream'd "Not 'IT'!" phonies, like these two pussies who are known for droppin rotten but i see ur verses match ya sex life how they switch from top to bottom 'n Spul's a fool, whose popularity has found'a regression so if Spul's the legend killer.. i guess suicide's out'a the question vs. I'm hard with action, ready to rip the flesh off ya bones then start the bashin' Cuz I skinheads, and i'll give Nicca beating like I was part of the faction You said you'd beat us? I'll battle for cash cuz everything you say is shit So Nick, put your money where your mouth is and pay my dick I'm knockin' Nick's face in so far, that I bet he'll be dyin', dude My fist to his skull will create such a huge Smash... ... that pepsi might try and sue Jacks hit rating is high, cuz I drop bombs like a tank b While Mets hit rating is so low ...it has all of New York routing for the Yankee's You compliment my style, but d/r won't save you from gettin whored dead I can tell I made a good impression on you ...with the dent I left in ya forehead I'll consider your face as my punching bag. I'm vicious. Fuck being humble I'll send such a huge blow to your temple<--- even the ones in India will start to crumble! 5 vs 6 Nick - you had a lot of good concepts but your wording fucked you over. The good ones were stretched to hell and it was like reading a paragraph. Untold - it seemed like all you wanted to do was use 'back' concepts at the beginning. Even your verse out with different types of punches. JTR - I think you did the best out of everyone in this battle. You flowed perfectly and your punches were very consistent. SPuL - you also had some stretched lines which is why you didnt have many quotables. Your concepts are good though. Just work on your wording so its not stretched. Close but.. V/ SPuL & JTR for having the better team verse.
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