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08-08-06, 01:45 AM
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**NEW TRACK** -Never Leave Me-
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My newest joint...that i have out track called "Never Leave Me" 3 different concepts of love....all express differently....
 1st: M.I.C 2nd: yours truly lmao 3rd: Sleepy I aint one for slow jams....ahahahha But here it is http://www.cryptocreep.com track Never Leave Me click hi-fi or lo-fi you know the deal My feedback links http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232669 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232366
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08-08-06, 02:26 AM
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ryme scheme is pretty ok ya starter hook was aight its funny i rocked this beat like 1 1/2 yr ago quality is tough tho a beat like this needs a bit more thought with lyrics ya flow is solid tho overall decent track man get me imma show u the track we did on this same beat
Clutch the microphone
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08-08-06, 11:17 AM
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Lmao....Tony not the openin' song to the page....its the first track doggy lmao under Angelz AkA M.G.D Feat. RoundS - Never Leave Me
lol all though the track Clutch the Microphone is hott...like the hook 
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08-08-06, 01:06 PM
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hey at least i listened lol
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08-08-06, 02:33 PM
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I need feedback for track homie not someone else's holla back ....lol
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08-08-06, 02:57 PM
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I see dumb people
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lol this a dachypa beat right? but beat is pretty hot..
first verse: dude's flow is pretty dope. ONly thing is, vocals way too low. Can't really hear him. but this flow is pretty tight. quality is coo, could be upped a lot th. lol but flow was ill. but I really couldn't hear verse so can't critique on much hook: smaple dope second verse: nice change from flow from first verse. flow coo for most part, only a few spots that were off. Lyrics pretty coo, hard to hear tho. Cuz vocals a lil low too. but other that that everything sounded coo. liked alcoholic shit third verse: quality ehh, could be upped too. lol this guy volume good. flow is aiight. choppy in some places. lyrics coo. not bad verse overall Overall song was pretty nice man. like the topic y'all did. was good. only thing, work on those vocal volumes yo. but good shit otherwise. 8.5/10 oh, and props for peepin' track yo. I just reuploaded the track tho with sample in iit, if you'd want that version more. just letting yo uknow. lol but props for feed, and good track yo. stay up EZ *valid feed* Last edited by Willa : 08-25-06 at 12:44 AM. |
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08-08-06, 05:52 PM
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No doubt dog good looks spul....ill check that out again....keep it 100
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08-08-06, 08:47 PM
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uppin' it cuz niggaz is sleepin on my shit lmao...more feed please
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08-08-06, 10:22 PM
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LMAO....i know son.....i aint want to add those lil girly voices but he wanted it in there for his shit so i thought i'd try it wont make cut for my album...but good lookin on the feedback son
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08-10-06, 12:32 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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Listening
Beat is slick...I like it...But, the sample is a tad obnoxious... Flow is good for this beat...Vocals sound muted and muffled tho... If you dubbed your main vocals, it's difficult to discern. 2nd verse...delivery/flow are lackluster and novice-like. Lyrics are decent at best 3rd...best delivery of the bunch...What was that cut-in of a sample? I didn't catch it. decent track...lacks polish |
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08-10-06, 01:57 PM
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Good looks for the Feed Q holla at yo boy 1
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08-10-06, 01:58 PM
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I don't lose
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the new kid on the block eh? i aint gon talk about the other people your second right.....
you sound a lil seperated from the beat, like you wrote that rap for something else n tried to make it work....it was a choppy flow at best.....needs work...but hey thats why your in OY to elevate....but on the positives you got a good voice and a lil swagger on the mic....so you could make it work if you just upped a lil shit.....oh n the third verse was corney with tha dude/girl voice overs.....eh
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08-10-06, 02:12 PM
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Flyweight
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HAHAHAHAA yea man im new..but good looks on the feed son.....look forward to collab wit everybody from O.Y.D holla at yo boy 1
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08-11-06, 11:59 AM
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...Closer Look...
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hmmm...
beat is cool..i am feeling it.. verse one...boy u came in dope..i liked ur rhymings..u got a gd quality..i had to listen to ur verse like 2ice to understand what u were sayting cos boy u were fast! verse 2..yeah u new like u said but u came up nice..u slipped off flow in some spots but ur background vocals helped a lil...nice lyrics..decent at least made sense! verse 3..cool emotion on this..i was feeling ur concept..cool verse..nothing more nothing less..just ok hit my sig!
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