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Old 08-18-06, 10:48 AM   #1
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New Shit... I'MA KING.. O.Y.D. JSUMMZ...Holla

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iz called i'ma king

breezeys first verse
jsummz on hook
jsummz on 2
Nick James on 3

i'll hit up tracks later i aint got no speakers ya feels me
*pm me 2 links*
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Old 08-18-06, 10:54 AM   #2
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First verse good vibe set the tone ....got that midwestin sound sounds similar to bubba........hook decent wouklda bee cool haven breezy sayin imma king......second verse is cool summz flow iz proper ......just a switch up or two woulda been solid.......third verse sounds decent falls slightly in a few spots but overall track is decent im just not a big fan of this style beat big ups kotn

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Old 08-19-06, 11:31 AM   #3
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hey thanx tone... upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp... i'll edit with links in a moment
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Old 08-19-06, 05:54 PM   #4
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OOOOH SHIT!! my boy j. summers and big breesu up in this

big breeze comin with that smooth verse shit...always doing his shit right.....
J. summers the hook is fuckin dope!! that 'OKAY!!!" part gets me hype.....
last verse doing it big as well...good sht yall

gotta hand it to ya......KINGS OF THE NORTH BIOTH!!!

CHURCH!!!!
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Old 08-19-06, 11:05 PM   #5
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What the deal Kangz

I agree with Tony about having Breez saying the I'ma King part. Breezus, you need to up your vocals a bit....actually, just raise your mids and it would make your voice sound extra illy dope and stuff. Flow and shit was alright for the most part. Your whole vibe is nice on this shit. J did his thang too. Held it down with the hook. Only thing I might have done was tone the rasp down just a little bit. Your verse was on point though. You guys are doing your thing man. We need to get a collab going or some shit for realz....

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Old 08-20-06, 01:35 AM   #6
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oh yea and one more thing.....during the hook at the beginnig when you go "OKAY!!!" have that part more times in teh chorus
like after the 2nd bar or something...if you get what i mean
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Old 08-20-06, 03:26 PM   #7
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Old 08-20-06, 06:16 PM   #8
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meh. not my type of joint. whoever went first needs to work on pressence and other dude needs to not scream but this track is aiight. Overall. 6.5/10
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Old 08-23-06, 12:29 PM   #9
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