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08-21-06, 05:00 PM | #1 | |
Hell yeah
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Dont Look(Club Banga)Produced By Me
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4344607
i made the beat a while ago, PT used it already but fuck off its my beat imma leave two links soon http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2823101 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2823103 *valid links* Last edited by Willa : 08-21-06 at 06:54 PM. |
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08-21-06, 05:08 PM | #2 | |
Hell yeah
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uppppy ..........
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08-21-06, 05:52 PM | #3 | ||
New to RV
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IP:
vocals sound a little soft. the horn is drowning them off. pretty good flow. the adlibs are a little off. i like the beat cut. i think the chorus could be turned up a little bit. the lyrics are ok, but they could be better. i couldnt understand you in some parts. you start going fast and with the beat as loud as it is it makes it hard to decipher. the beat is nice though. real good club sound. i like how that ended, didnt drag it out to long just let it end, pretty nice job here.
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08-21-06, 06:13 PM | #4 | ||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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I like this beat of course you already know
its FIYA SON alright for the breakdown Whats Hot:The Beat of course The flow change-ups Whats Good:The pressense/emotion Whats Ok:the mixing and the flow You def. have gotten better everytime i listen your song This is pretty solid Whats Off:The hook is off a little bit you gotta make people know what your talkin about.... Whats Wack:nothin Overall:this shits ok its more of a mixtape typa track.....ur def. gettin better tho a lil while longer and u'll be gettin better just keep doing it man..u'll get it...this is an ok song......just switch up the hook a lil bit......6.2/10 keep it up -Past Tense aka PT |
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08-21-06, 07:40 PM | #6 | |
Hell yeah
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thanks apreciate the feed
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08-22-06, 11:55 AM | #7 | |
Ike
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beat is ok...nothin that like jumps out to me or nothing...but its coo....
sounds like the mix is maybe a lil loud..or not mixed to the beat well...it kinda hurts my ears....flow is ok...lyrics are ok...i think the hook is ok..but coulda been executed better... delivery is pretty good too...there not a lot wrong with this...its just not anything i would bump in the whip or anything
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08-22-06, 12:42 PM | #8 | |
Hell yeah
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IP:
thanks for the feed
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08-22-06, 10:39 PM | #9 | |
Hell yeah
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