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09-21-06, 11:48 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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Best Song I've Ever Done!!!!!!
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Yo, I'm really feeling this song, so I could really care less what anyone else thinks, but I feel I should atleast share the dopeness
 But for real, it's a song about my kids that I did for the audio topical league that I think turned out real good, so criticize away.... All That Matters PS.....B. Magik Made This Dope Ass Beat!!!!!!!!!!! Leave a link.....I guarantee I'll return the favor Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235194 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235210
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09-22-06, 12:42 AM
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wow dude, I love how you wrote this for ya kids. Something they can listen to when they get older, that's so fuckin deadly!. I love the hook it's very catchy and I think I can agree with you on this being ya best shit. The lyrics are so deadly and true from the heart. Your flow is on lock with this beat too, overall this is gettin downloaded and what not. I love your shit man peace! rtf please: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235147
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09-22-06, 01:35 AM
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listning-beatz nice........first verse....flows nice.........deleverys sick as hell.......lyrics r dopness hookz on nice real fast an its ill.....second verse....fuck man this is some dope sit fer real lyrics was deep as hell i gotta baby boi due any day......an werd this track is fucking hott im on my way to bed or i woulda left nicer feed third verse is also sick u killed this shit period dogg hott ish
10/10 propz famo
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09-22-06, 02:17 PM
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contolled chaos hahahha.... sickness right here....
this is hittin hard cuz we spoke on some of this shit in this verse.... so i can relate to this track a lot more.... im lovin this ... puttin down the mic to watch dora explorer with your daughter.... thats real son... you came off as a centered family man... and this track solidifys that for me.... this is real man... most deff something imma DL and bump in the whip... ps... my girl takin a Pregnancy test today... she late.... so... there might be a baby Bronsky on the way... lol.... Stoked.... FAMILY IS ALL THAT FUCKIN MATTERS werd to that shit 10/10 -Don Tito Bronsky
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09-22-06, 04:37 PM
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i like the beat. real smooth. flow is a lil different, but it seems to have some rhythem. lyrics are good. delivery is decent. chorus is nice, flow gets better here. 2nd verse is better then verse 1, but theres not a large difference in sound, im feelin it. verse 3 is better then verse 1, but not quite as good as verse 2, good overall track. sounds like some kanye shit.
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09-23-06, 12:14 PM
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show this man some love
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09-23-06, 01:27 PM
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I like it alot.
Yeah, thats gone be really cool for your kids when they hear it in a few years. Beat is nice. Flow is nice. Ya put alot of passion into this.
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09-23-06, 06:39 PM
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wow, i'm not even gonna leave much feed here cuz im lazy
but basically, this track was for the fam....more specifically your kids....sounded good.....and came from the heart you get a 10/10 just based on that pz
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09-24-06, 11:08 AM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP:
Word....thanks for all the love on this track fellas
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09-25-06, 10:20 AM
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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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ths sounds like the type of shyt i would write! i got songs like this that i never recorded... this shyt is a perfect 10, dunny!
the flow...the beat... the lyrics.... the whole damn thing was just off da meters... (damn, i gotta up my game after this one)... now, y'all know i don't usually leave feed on the OYD fam cuz of all the hataz and shyt that claim how we be riding each other and shyt.,.. but this is one of those exceptional tracks that i just had to say sumn about and show the love... this shyt was genuine and from the heart... and being that i got 3 kids of my own and just happened to be former military i can relate to every aspect of this joint Definitely going in the whip!
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09-26-06, 10:46 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP:
Word....thanks man
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09-27-06, 06:46 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP:
LOL sounds like some elavator music!!! i like it lol beats tight
On some real shit lyrics were really tight....flow was really nice...good change ups. Had me bobbing my head Hook was Really Good..... You should have turned up ur vocals up a little bit and it'da been better but this shit is really good keep it up man |
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09-28-06, 02:04 AM
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IP:
ayo i left feed on this from the tournament but i'll do it again.
when i first read that u made it for ur kids, i thought i might not give u honest feed cause its for ur kids. but this song was actually a cool song. jus the fact that u made it for them says a lot. i thought that was real cool. lyrically u kinda opened up quite a bit. ur flow was on point man. theres nothing i can really say about this. good job. ur kids should be proud of u |
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09-29-06, 01:02 AM
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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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uppin this for da fam..... y'all gotta feel this!
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09-29-06, 12:27 PM
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IP:
best song you ever did? isn this the first ?lol uppppppppppppppppppp
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