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09-24-06, 04:59 PM | #1 | ||
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Verse 5
IP:
Yo this, Venom'll, knock you off ya pedastool
You get shivers anytime i drop incredible If you aint fellin this, i will insist, you still admit Im spillin shit, illa than most cats with skill and it, Aint a thang, for me drop at a rate the the same As, chingy, 50, buck or lets say a game But honestly i'd rather, not go backwords I'd rather rap with the talent of Hov or mathers As i gather the brainpower, needed to rain showers Of rhymes and at time i need it to maim cowards Either die or resign im weeded and drank sour Mash, biddin my time, no reason to wait hours Pass, Plus i battle with wit, spit shit that'll inflict Fear in ya heart, and'll prolly rattle ya clique Im outfitted to plow critics, wont get outwitted And i cant describe the way my style shitted, All over these hoes that pose as no threat If i go first it'll make my foes sweat And i smoke mad buddah, to last through the, Vernacular, while you lack loot i relax to a Spectacular, faded state, while you sulk and playa hate You say i wont make it, shit, i say its fate. |
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09-24-06, 08:14 PM | #2 | ||
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IP:
nice drop homie everything look on point 2 me but wut the hell is vernacular man? n im not bien a hata i seriously dont kno so dont front...peep my lyrical hustla link in my sig
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09-25-06, 08:52 AM | #3 | ||
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IP:
Dopeness fams !! like the change up in flow,... nice vocab,..
top bar: Pass, Plus i battle with wit, spit shit that'll inflict Fear in ya heart, and'll prolly rattle ya clique ^Dope^ P.s Vernacular = Lingo, Language Stay up Anx 1~ |
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09-26-06, 12:00 PM | #4 | ||
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IP:
this joint was tight shawty, i was feelin the way you carried over bar after bar that was pretty gully. it keep me readin it. Erething in the joint was nice.
As i gather the brainpower, needed to rain showers Of rhymes and at time i need it to maim cowards ^^^ That was my fav bar outta the thing. hit me back on my shit.......be easy |
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09-26-06, 08:46 PM | #5 | ||
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IP:
haven't seen you in awhile there ajax, You still got it though. flow was on point and the storyline was there. just some shit I'd like to hear on a song. overall decetn drop keep doin it. 1
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09-27-06, 02:09 AM | #6 | ||
Light Weight
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IP:
illy drop mayne
"All over these hoes that pose as no threat If i go first it'll make my foes sweat And i smoke mad buddah, to last through the, Vernacular, while you lack loot i relax to a" haha, i'd love hearin this on a audio...it'd be dope fa'real. keep tha skill goin folk
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09-28-06, 01:05 PM | #7 | ||
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IP:
Word im gonna record a bunch of open mics to songs once i get my comp and mic for christmas. Thanks for the feed back.
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