Never Say I Love You

I wanted to take this time to tell this story
A boy and a gurl close enough with the glory
Kissin n huggin tellin each other everything
Everyone noticed the couples very fling
Life gotta little hard without peace and love
His ex got em so frustrated, (he couldn't easily shrug)
He thought he was inlove, but neglected that
She wanted truth, (but he didn't respect the fact)
But he knew if he told her; he was in love
Eventually it'd hit em back with such a grudge
That he was right!, cause minutes later
He told her truth and she threw it back
It made him so major, so blue and black
He was unable to move, (he'd eventually crack)
And go insane, gettin into small fights
And those small fights turned to long nights, Under the moon

He couldn't stop thinkin, ("damn I'm so stupid")
He told her trust, but she gave em no cupid
She left his soul to burn without another chance
Instead he'd question himself to advance
Than he noticed her with other dudes around
He felt jealous knowin he couldn't hold her down
All he wanted was someone to be his opposite
But because of words and all the gossip
He was refused, (he couldn't make his move)
She had em confused, but still he was glued...
To her fragrance, her looks and fashion
He had sorry written out on crooked passion
He tried explainin sex wasn't his goal
But she didn't believe, (but truth was told!)
All he really wanted was a moment to chill
She took it the wrong way and just stood still

After words he didn’t mean to place the quilt
She felt hate, but fate made em both rebuild
Never would he do somin outta this world
But he couldn’t refuse such a fine ass gurl
He wanted to say, (“yo that’s mine to hold”)
Not for some idiot sayin lines he stole
He kept his words to himself incase..
She wrecked his soul without the grace
All he ever wanted was a female for delight
To have company with em all damn night
But he realized she wasn’t worth the mind games
She’d only play em and always wine wit shame
No not the pain being used so wrong
He couldn’t take it anymore so he cruised along
Now that tension was out, he felt sad but free
He was able to receive feelin glad to see..

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Good Piece Good Piece Nice Vocab... Hit My Song Up "misery"

^shitty ass feedback bitch...fuck you! uppin

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i was feelin this mah dude. you had an original type of format for ya verse. i liked how you had it like the guy was thinkin to himself in the verse. Ya flow was pretty good. i guess you were just trynna keep it nice n simple to get the story across. and alotta mc's dont know how ot telll a story anymore. but only thing i would do is still keep one or two punches in there just to keep it interesting ya dig?

holla at me on my shit...the links r in the sig mah dude........

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