This song right here I dedicated to my cousin. It's a song about her that basically no matter what she goes through, she needs to roll with it cause Life will go on. I don't know if you'll understand but I hope you enjoy it.

www.myspace.com/reflekt88



Links -

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235413
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235440
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235458
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235225

ayo come on. dont sleep on this.

uppin this one for feeeeeeeeeed

ayo come on man dont sleep on this one..

kk listnin............intros str8.....coulda been turned up a bit but st8......
shit this starts off nice fam.........flowz nice man killin dis beat.......delevery is perfect for this man....lyrics is hott as helll famo.....hook is catchy and true str8 realness.....
verse 2........flows dead on again.........ya emotion is str8 on this man...i can feel wut chu sayin bro......i did actually hear u fall off a bit in this verse at tha end.....hook again.....**bumps head**third verse.......ok n/m it was just a bridge......nice outra but again shoulda turned up ta intro cause outro was louder but st8 shit fam.....nice drop.......get at me for a collab sometime.....
9/10
**putz on ipod**

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^thanks for the feed.

i appreciate it. if u need feed on something, let me know. and no doubt we can get on a collab.

listening

intro...too low i didnt even get what u were saying!

ur vocals..umm,shud have turned it up a lil,u had a decent and steady flow,emotion was there,storyline is cool i liked it,i liked the hook more tho..yeah!..quality needs to be upped a lil more and dayuum cud have shortened the outro a lil it was taking a lil too long to end..it seemed like another verse was coming instead nothing!..and that is it from me...

Click Here for the updated versions of both tracks on my siggy..u cud hit up any1 u feel like!

thank you!

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Your flow, reminds me of me on a song I did called "Dear Lord".

The beat is sad, like Rey said, but it's pretty nice for emotion. The intro does need to be more coherent, and the vocals could be turned up a little, to give it a more emotional feel.

But flow is on point, i think the hook could be a little more, or even a little less to add to the simplicity of the feeling of emotions. Just to make it pop out more. Flow is kinda sketchy on the second verse. Like your forcing yourself to stay on beat. Which gives you a kinda Strained feel.

But overall its a pretty good song, I like it.

8/10

RTF. Please.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235654

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iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

thanks for the feed guys. ima get at the links right now

returning the favor...

ahh i hate listening through myspace...it compresses the song and makes quality worse....


beat is nice......flow is nice.....presence is also good........delivery is really good.....

hook is ok...not something ima be singing the whole day or anything.....but its pretty good......overall this is a pretty dope track man....no complaints......i dont really know what to say about it....good stuff

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^thanks for the feed ike.