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Old 10-01-06, 10:12 AM   #1
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19. Tony Brown (1-2) vs 20. Stanza (3-6)

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Old 10-01-06, 05:33 PM   #2
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w/e, got cheated outta my last battle though
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Old 10-04-06, 09:30 PM   #3
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Tony Brown
w/e, got cheated outta my last battle though


lmao..

Man Your ass Will get Sattled and branded like free range cattle
Face the Facts Your Ass is way to Wack To get cheated out of a battle
i'm just quoting this to tell ya it's way too bland homie. you coulda used it a lot better
Its Too late You Should Change Yo name to Piano the Way I play Your F.A.C.E
The Only Time Tony ever Dropped Dope...Was On Opposite Day
i'm assuming there's such a thing as opposite day seeing i've never heard of it

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Had a thing for the professor, i know u wanted that freak
You dumb as shit thas why the teacher gave ST D's
Really im not tryin, u weightless, i'll get ta pushin
N make u do a face-plant, like i threw ya ass in the bushes
Bla bla, played played, wack wack, filler filler
Dont you see? anything you can do...i can do better
i woulda made the rhyme iller

v/ TB - didn't seem like he tried.. but he still took this pretty easily. keep at it dudes.
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Old 10-01-06, 09:03 PM   #4
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Old 10-03-06, 07:31 PM   #5
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Man Your ass Will get Sattled and branded like free range cattle
Face the Facts Your Ass is way to Wack To get cheated out of a battle
Man Your Not one Of my Primary Colors Your Brown Not RBG
Tony Your A Busted Raping Vocalists And Yet You still can Be.R.V
look up man your Not worthy of even Being in the league anymore
If You had Hustle your flow to Make The dough.....Rv would know Your Poor
man This Dude Bengay like The Medacine, so Whats there To say
When I spit you Betta Ring The alarm for help like Beyonce'
Its Too late You Should Change Yo name to Piano the Way I play Your F.A.C.E
The Only Time Tony ever Dropped Dope...Was On Opposite Day
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Old 10-04-06, 09:03 PM   #6
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I seen ya shit n truthfully y verses suck, no lie
Im Still tryna figure Out how u Decide Wut words to Capitalize
Had a thing for the professor, i know u wanted that freak
You dumb as shit thas why the teacher gave ST D's
yal fakas is just the same, ima put it simple n plain
NOK out kings? shit, no wonder i never liked that game
Really im not tryin, u weightless, i'll get ta pushin
N make u do a face-plant, like i threw ya ass in the bushes
Bla bla, played played, wack wack, filler filler
Dont you see? anything you can do...i can do better
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Old 10-04-06, 10:06 PM   #7
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thanx mayne 1-0
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Old 10-04-06, 10:52 PM   #8
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vote-tony brown

Really im not tryin, u weightless, i'll get ta pushin
N make u do a face-plant, like i threw ya ass in the bushes
Bla bla, played played, wack wack, filler filler
Dont you see? anything you can do...i can do better

stanza didn't have anything i really liked..opposite day line? i dunno lol man the set up wasn't too good either
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Old 10-05-06, 01:33 AM   #9
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TB- verse was decent...punches were just way better then the other guy..

Stanza- verse was decent also, punches didnt seem good...started out okay but then went down..

v/Tony Brown
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Old 10-05-06, 09:40 AM   #10
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Wow this battle sucked... you both aint try or something huh?

Tony... wasnt really feelin anything from your verse... not really anything stood out but that is fine due to the fact of who you are battling... he basically there to give people free wins and the newbies a little bit of a challenge...but word you took this easy

Stanza i see you trying to elevate i just dont see you doing it much... but damn you still gotta step it up

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Old 10-05-06, 01:02 PM   #11
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Stanza.

man This Dude Bengay like The Medacine

Seen before, but decent attempt at wordplay.

Had a thing for the professor, i know u wanted that freak
You dumb as shit thas why the teacher gave ST D's
Really im not tryin, u weightless, i'll get ta pushin
N make u do a face-plant, like i threw ya ass in the bushes

Feelin' those.

Overall: Tony Brown had more stand outs, Stanza. didn't really come with any thing stand out-ish to take this battle.

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Old 10-05-06, 01:59 PM   #12
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Had a thing for the professor, i know u wanted that freak
You dumb as shit thas why the teacher gave ST D's
Really im not tryin, u weightless, i'll get ta pushin
N make u do a face-plant, like i threw ya ass in the bushes

Vs

nuthin....

V/Tony brown....this was onesided....even tho tony came weak his verse all arooud was better it had punchs and decent personals...stanza your gettin there werk on ya wording an concepts...
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Old 10-05-06, 05:05 PM   #13
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Man Your ass Will get Sattled and branded like free range cattle
Face the Facts Your Ass is way to Wack To get cheated out of a battle
Man Your Not one Of my Primary Colors Your Brown Not RBG
Tony Your A Busted Raping Vocalists And Yet You still can Be.R.V
look up man your Not worthy of even Being in the league anymore
If You had Hustle your flow to Make The dough.....Rv would know Your Poor
man This Dude Bengay like The Medacine, so Whats there To say
When I spit you Betta Ring The alarm for help like Beyonce'
Its Too late You Should Change Yo name to Piano the Way I play Your F.A.C.E
The Only Time Tony ever Dropped Dope...Was On Opposite Day


^^dude... average at best.... if that



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I seen ya shit n truthfully y verses suck, no lie
Im Still tryna figure Out how u Decide Wut words to Capitalize
Had a thing for the professor, i know u wanted that freak
You dumb as shit thas why the teacher gave ST D's
yal fakas is just the same, ima put it simple n plain
NOK out kings? shit, no wonder i never liked that game
Really im not tryin, u weightless, i'll get ta pushin
N make u do a face-plant, like i threw ya ass in the bushes
Bla bla, played played, wack wack, filler filler
Dont you see? anything you can do...i can do better



^^lmfao @ the std line


V/tony


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Old 10-06-06, 11:31 AM   #14
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Man Your ass Will get Sattled and branded like free range cattle
Face the Facts Your Ass is way to Wack To get cheated out of a battle
Man Your Not one Of my Primary Colors Your Brown Not RBG
Tony Your A Busted Raping Vocalists And Yet You still can Be.R.V
look up man your Not worthy of even Being in the league anymore
If You had Hustle your flow to Make The dough.....Rv would know Your Poor

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I seen ya shit n truthfully y verses suck, no lie
Im Still tryna figure Out how u Decide Wut words to Capitalize
Had a thing for the professor, i know u wanted that freak
You dumb as shit thas why the teacher gave ST D's
yal fakas is just the same, ima put it simple n plain
NOK out kings? shit, no wonder i never liked that game
Really im not tryin, u weightless, i'll get ta pushin
N make u do a face-plant, like i threw ya ass in the bushes
Bla bla, played played, wack wack, filler filler
Dont you see? anything you can do...i can do better

v. tony brown
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Old 10-06-06, 04:51 PM   #15
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Man Your ass Will get Sattled and branded like free range cattle
Face the Facts Your Ass is way to Wack To get cheated out of a battle

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I seen ya shit n truthfully y verses suck, no lie
Im Still tryna figure Out how u Decide Wut words to Capitalize
Had a thing for the professor, i know u wanted that freak
You dumb as shit thas why the teacher gave ST D's
yal fakas is just the same, ima put it simple n plain
NOK out kings? shit, no wonder i never liked that game
Really im not tryin, u weightless, i'll get ta pushin
N make u do a face-plant, like i threw ya ass in the bushes

Stanza, ur first bar was a nice personal, I liked that. That was about all I was really feelin' from ya though. Tony, ur opener hit him hard cuz it was true, lol, nice mockery. The STD line was good, but u shoulda used it based on diseases. Funny thing is, ur verse looked like it took 5 minutes, but it was actually a good verse, lol.

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