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Old 10-14-06, 06:59 AM   #1
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"Rhyme Schemes"...yes,your eyes are seeing correctly! NEW Q JOINT!

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Beat: Mister KA
Hook and both verses: Q

Concept: I'm just spitting stuff off the top of my head...There's no real theme here...I'm experimenting with flow and rhyme schemes...So, it's basically a braggadocio track.


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Old 10-14-06, 10:24 AM   #2
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Listenin'.. yeah i know about ya quality...so I aint gon say nothin'...

Hook: pretty kool...not much 2 say about that..

Verses...rhyme schem is nice, real nice...lyrics good...delivery is nice..flow pretty str8..

wasnt hindenburg a soldier?..or like a boat

lol

but i see you doing ya school teacher shit on the hook haa word hydrogen...

multis was working...

yeah quality i knw is bad n u cnt do much about it but still wuda sounded much mroe better with the quality..u shud re record this..

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can you rtf please:

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...894#post3091894
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Old 10-14-06, 10:28 AM   #3
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^^Hindenburg was a big blimp that burned to the ground...
and I'll def. RTF a lil lata




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Old 10-14-06, 10:30 AM   #4
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yeah no doubt Q
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Old 10-14-06, 11:24 AM   #5
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lol at pussy closed line
i totally missed the hook the first time but i like it
track was pretty cool overall flow was cool flow was on point
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Old 10-14-06, 01:40 PM   #6
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preciate the feed




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Old 10-16-06, 05:35 AM   #7
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Old 10-16-06, 01:16 PM   #8
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a new Q track is up
but I dont see a new zone out and q track up
I wonder why?
oh, due to procrastination
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 10-16-06, 07:25 PM   #9
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^ i didnt get that...oh well good shit... you need to get your quality back its hard to listen to....but beneith all that this is something you should re-do when you get quality back its nice....good hook.....n nice flow switches....good shit....really get a set up dog
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Old 10-16-06, 11:33 PM   #11
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flow switches on pioint sometimes amongst all this souther flow we lose sight of real hip hop and its versitile ways hook sounded solid the quality hampers this a bit gotta get that set up soon ....holla at me good shit
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Old 10-17-06, 08:14 PM   #12
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Old 10-19-06, 08:08 AM   #13
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beat is familiar..its from mr koomak right?


whateva happened to ur delivery?..flow was on point besides ur rhyme switch!..the last hook i think u yelled a lil too much!..u left beat for too long bruh shud have just faded it out..tracks iight tho..
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