Check, 12 Is Good...

yea, 12 is cool.


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236497
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236502
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236503
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236577

With them verses you drop your fit for Queen….I say fuck your plan
Because every time Tiara punchline……..we never see that shit land
Im undefeated in this league kid….and we all know this kid is queer
So ill flip your name around…to show that OraTe nobody good here
Your bitch likes me more then you… but damn that shit has to burn
I mean your girl is always trying to Serve me…
…But damn…tell that hoe to Waiter fuckin turn
When it comes down to it Ora’s a fag........with mini skirts & Capri’s
Cuz it don’t take a golfer to know…....balls are known to be on Te’s
But damn I think I got bad Vision.…maybe my eye just has a twitch
^Cuz even Eyeball...,,when I read how Sad your punches are bitch
You don’t get any girls bitch…....and this bitch never gets any head
But he will see some ass......right after we Boo Te outta the thread

^that verse is almost a perfect square, but can't come near these quotes
you can have four even sides.. cause i'll let each have zero votes
dem franchise boyz would be proud.. but it ain't a beast that i'm facing
"wyte, te" lines are still played.. long after their song ceased rotation
your an idiot.. rap aint for wytes.. so quit with the writtens cat
this dudes darf.. but thought the "dark side" was spittin raps
we're both new here, but i sense dislike, whenever i state rhymes
it's like i'm black.. cause wyte beating me would be a hate crime
fuka nameplay. this lames gay, he'll leave with marks when we clash
and would be M.J Fox's dream politician.. the way he parkinsons ass
got 2 no show wins, and a big head.. your still gay when ya flow
last week you were lookin to fuck dudes up..
..but couldn't cause Men ain't show

fagbag.

Nice Edit, Nice Feed, But It's Whatever, Let's Get Some Honest Votes.

Just for the record wyte... he can edit as many times as he wants aslong as noone has voted sinec he dropped second... and i aint really think it was feeding if you notice the punch i thought that at first aswell but White T like the shit... it could be thought of both ways though i guess cause he saying "wyte te lines are played" or he could be saying that "white t's blah blah blah" ya know... anyways on with the voting

With them verses you drop your fit for Queen….I say fuck your plan
Because every time Tiara punchline……..we never see that shit land
This was eh to me... wording wasnt that good.. This could have deffintly been a nice punch had you exacuted it correctly.
Im undefeated in this league kid….and we all know this kid is queer
So ill flip your name around…to show that OraTe nobody good here
Still meh... saying he ate noone good here, true but he aint ate noone to beging with
Your bitch likes me more then you… but damn that shit has to burn
I mean your girl is always trying to Serve me…
…But damn…tell that hoe to Waiter fuckin turn
Nah not feelin... mabye if you was on "yo momma" or something
When it comes down to it Ora’s a fag........with mini skirts & Capri’s
Cuz it don’t take a golfer to know…....balls are known to be on Te’s
Rofl... i liked this.. coulda worded it better but still funny
But damn I think I got bad Vision.…maybe my eye just has a twitch
^Cuz even Eyeball...,,when I read how Sad your punches are bitch
Not bad... played wordplay but still not bad
You don’t get any girls bitch…....and this bitch never gets any head
But he will see some ass......right after we Boo Te outta the thread
Nah seen shit like this to many times


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^that verse is almost a perfect square, but can't come near these quotes
you can have four even sides.. cause i'll let each have zero votes
Nah not feelin
dem franchise boyz would be proud.. but it ain't a beast that i'm facing
"wyte, te" lines are still played.. long after their song ceased rotation
Coulda been nice if it was a punch instead of a statment
your an idiot.. rap aint for wytes.. so quit with the writtens cat
this dudes darf.. but thought the "dark side" was spittin raps
WTF...?? its DARTH... n NAH
we're both new here, but i sense dislike, whenever i state rhymes
it's like i'm black.. cause wyte beating me would be a hate crime
Ehish
fuka nameplay. this lames gay, he'll leave with marks when we clash
and would be M.J Fox's dream politician.. the way he parkinsons ass
Nice.
got 2 no show wins, and a big head.. your still gay when ya flow
last week you were lookin to fuck dudes up..
..but couldn't cause Men ain't show
Nice


When it comes down to it Ora’s a fag........with mini skirts & Capri’s
Cuz it don’t take a golfer to know…....balls are known to be on Te’s
But damn I think I got bad Vision.…maybe my eye just has a twitch
^Cuz even Eyeball...,,when I read how Sad your punches are bitch

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fuka nameplay. this lames gay, he'll leave with marks when we clash
and would be M.J Fox's dream politician.. the way he parkinsons ass
got 2 no show wins, and a big head.. your still gay when ya flow
last week you were lookin to fuck dudes up..
..but couldn't cause Men ain't show

Alright way i see it is.. Both yall had 2 quotables in my opnion. Only thing to set the deciding vote since its tied with quotables without being gay and saying who had the better non quoatables would be to break it down with the better of the 4 quotables.. Wyte-Your first quote was nice i liked your punch... wording was a lil meh but still a nice punch.. your second one wsa good but kinda played concept... Te Ora- Both of your bars was nice and made me laugh, none was played or the wording wasnt really that off on either of them so im gunna give this to you with the better of the two quotables

V/ Te Ora

Nice battle both of you this was close... i doubt the other voters will think its this close cause everyone else is a bunch of clowns so yeah... besta luck to both you though. no hate

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yea, i fed so right now it should be 0-0. i had a couple quotes in there but decided to edit them out, it doesn't matta tho.. no one had voted yet. lookin for more votes y'all.

Word, Upping 0-0.

WYTE



When it comes down to it Ora’s a fag........with mini skirts & Capri’s
Cuz it don’t take a golfer to know…....balls are known to be on Te’s
But damn I think I got bad Vision.…maybe my eye just has a twitch
^Cuz even Eyeball...,,when I read how Sad your punches are bitch
You don’t get any girls bitch…....and this bitch never gets any head
But he will see some ass......right after we Boo Te outta the thread


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TE ORA


dem franchise boyz would be proud.. but it ain't a beast that i'm facing
"wyte, te" lines are still played.. long after their song ceased rotation
we're both new here, but i sense dislike, whenever i state rhymes
it's like i'm black.. cause wyte beating me would be a hate crime
fuka nameplay. this lames gay, he'll leave with marks when we clash
and would be M.J Fox's dream politician.. the way he parkinsons ass
got 2 no show wins, and a big head.. your still gay when ya flow
last week you were lookin to fuck dudes up..
..but couldn't cause Men ain't show

V/ Te Ora

Good battle on both sides. Both of you started kind of slow but Te had one more quotable and better wordplay. The golf line by wyte was good tho but Te just edged it out

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Up over no-shows.

dem franchise boyz would be proud.. but it ain't a beast that i'm facing
"wyte, te" lines are still played.. long after their song ceased rotation
we're both new here, but i sense dislike, whenever i state rhymes
it's like i'm black.. cause wyte beating me would be a hate crime

that was good....

But damn I think I got bad Vision.…maybe my eye just has a twitch
^Cuz even Eyeball...,,when I read how Sad your punches are bitch

needs to be worded better


v/ Te

But damn I think I got bad Vision.…maybe my eye just has a twitch
^Cuz even Eyeball...,,when I read how Sad your punches are bitch
You don’t get any girls bitch…....and this bitch never gets any head
But he will see some ass......right after we Boo Te outta the thread

vs.

dem franchise boyz would be proud.. but it ain't a beast that i'm facing
"wyte, te" lines are still played.. long after their song ceased rotation
we're both new here, but i sense dislike, whenever i state rhymes
it's like i'm black.. cause wyte beating me would be a hate crime

This battle was much closer than I expected... Wyte came better than I've seen him come, but too many nameplays, it got repetitive. Ur wording still needs some work cuz the eyeball line coulda been better. Closer I thought was kinda witty. Te, pretty sub-par verse, looked like u didn't put as much effort as you have in the past. Still, 2 solid quotables and the hate crime line was my fave of the battle, I was gonna use a line like that against him in 1-2 but didn't. Hmmm, overall just cuz of better wordin consistently through the verse I gotta give this to Te.

Vote - Te Ora

Take Me Out The League, Im Not Going To Be On For A Couple Weeks.

^fair enough.. there is a sign out thread y'know..


3-0.. thnx 4 the votes, propz on the battle.