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10-30-06, 03:48 AM
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why so serious!!??
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hip hop's resting place
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here i am dropping music for people who dont read
ya'll just gonna ruin it cuz none of ya'll leave no feed maybe im overdoing it whenever i let my pen bleed here's my pad i drew in it but now theres no need ta carry on any longer we dont respect the culture we disapointed its father and bitch slapped its mother filled it wit imposters that turned inta one hit wonders should hand out oscars for teaching kids cuss words all these terrible actors make us look gullable to it these perishable bastards will die makin us look stupid throwin away the skills and hyping up the beats its like promising beauty while your married to the beast its like shaking the booty while the shit fuckin wreaks its like feelin her boobys while all the air in it leaks so i tried ta ressurect it cuz whats left of its scary but what could i do.......i left it in the hip hop cemetary yea just was bored and felt like writing some shit links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236386 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236398
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10-30-06, 04:33 AM
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IP:
this was....a nice freeverse man some nice twisted concepts of multies here and there also some iight metaphorical shit..nice drop all together but make something of a story line now since you can drop metaphorical and multie syllable....try it out man it would be a nice try!
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10-30-06, 09:08 AM
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IP:
I liked this keystyle/freestyle verse. I liked the metaphors and your wordplay. The multis were so so but this was a good verse.7/10
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10-30-06, 01:50 PM
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why so serious!!??
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IP:
thanx for the feed ya'll i appreciate it
any pieces u want me ta RTF on drop a link
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10-30-06, 02:48 PM
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IP:
thought u did audio??????smh
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10-30-06, 02:55 PM
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why so serious!!??
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IP:
lol i do but i was just droppin sumthin cuz i was bored and just felt like writing
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11-02-06, 01:06 AM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP:
cool freeverse some nice multis and shit liked the closer
idk i never read text lol so word
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