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Grab Ya Toilet Tissue
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ya flow wuz mostly on point........but ur fell off at a couple points.......when u first started it off it wuz mad choppy.......when u take a slow fall u gotta come wit high energy or nice delivery.......but work on gettin ya flow more fluid.....ya had a couple of good lines.....ya like punnin on words.....not bad....
but quality wise u probrably gotta work wit what ya got........if ya got CEP 2.0 i could help ya out...... Hook - pretty funny i like da concept of it........ aiite man keep workin on ya flow and quality.........keep droppen......... pz ~1~ |
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honestly... sucks... emotion lacks... vocals werent well produced... too scratchy for my liking... do some research on production.
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haha i like the concept of this song...your flow was aiight in some places it got a lil off....i liked yo lyrics couple lines was hot i aint gone lie...chorus was humerous..wit the toilet paper lol...but quality wasn't too hot but keep droppin and i'ma keep feedin nice track tho...keep it up fam... 1
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Haha, you know what it is mane. i known you for a minute now (IA in the houssee!!!), so you know i'm gonna hold you to a higher standard.
lol aight man i already listned to this song mad time lol shits hillarious man, you know how to hold it down with the word play. your flow got rough some spots (and i know you know where), and you took the easy way out on your rhyme scheme a couple times, but overall the track is pretty hot. i liked it, where i coulda loved it next time... ..you know what to do.. Edit: Oh yeah, you already know your mic is doodoo sauce but from what it used to be, lmao oh man you mix it beastly kid lmao
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great looks everybody.....yea i know the quality could be better...but workin with a hp headset mic....lmao not too bad......good looks Apexx......good to SEE ya name for a change.....(AWWW MAN IA!!!!) sigh brings back mememories....
but yea look out for the next few yall...flow and quality....gotcha...workin pull-UPS^^ |
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lol word up man aaahhhh...the IA days.....hahhaa dayum
Yo drop that It's Whatever freestyle beeotch ![]()
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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lol.....you got some nice wordplay in here man. I was feeling that overdose line. Anyway, good shit man. You could use a little better presence and maybe a better mic like Apexx was saying, but overall it ain't that bad man....
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apexx......dropped.....its on here
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The Alien Toung
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flows nice, voice is good, could be better w mixing obviously, lota nice metas, some corny ones...hooks ill...macho man line was nice, squash beef line not bad...debit card line nice, sneeze line was ehhhh...cash year line nice..value of a dime line nice, n them multis was ill...broke up like bad fights lol....
good stuff
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thanx homie......alot^^
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I see dumb people
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yo drop your soundclick yo. that link don't work to me. cuz some pop-up blocker shit...
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