somthin ta let yall know what im about

nigga it's E my mind so compleX~I'm~a~KING Yes~and~I~bring/
all types of weapons~and~things The tec~in~the~sling/
Mac~in~the~trunk an Backin~it~up/
blastin~this~fuck for passin~me~looks/
I'm sick~of~this~shit so stop all that that bick~er~in~bitch/
I'll hunt ya ass down and graze ya grid~with~a~brick/
so Time~ya~replies,im fillin them with cryin~and~lies/
All type of bullshit....... so I'm fryin~this~guy/
Like bacon~in~pans, lyrically im takin~you~man/
To a graveyard cos ya just as fake~as~ya~fans/
your a queen nigga and im straight Breakin~ya~clan/
yep im talkin~ta~you ill be robbin~ya~dames poppin~the~flame/
Roastin~ya~crew while I'm rockin~ya~frame/
put my gat to ya~lips u black out like a solar a~clipse/
bust 6 ,drop, and reload on my~clips/
carry burds but aint down wit the~Dips/
makin bitches nervous scare~em~to~shits/
im greedy, na i aint sharin~my ~hits/
step back hater what'chu starin~at~bitch?/
i aint a magician but i know a few disappear~in~tricks/


links

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...756&postcount=2

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...483&postcount=8

^That's what I'm talking about, E!

Go get em dog.

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Lmao@your Crew............
This Was Average At Best Stop Braggin

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^lol what city in Canada do you live in?

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toronto..............................grime city

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lmao ok mayn thanx for the feed

u do text if u do then battle me

LOL Trouble, guess what, I'm in Toronto too! Regent Park Life nigguh!

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text is not rap imo so no i dont text sorry

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..........................loll

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regent park manz up in here ehh good ish famo i was in jane an finch area but relocated to tha shwa latly
416 to 905 blaoooooooooo

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Jane n Finch is live.....'yall got Chuckie Akens, is he a cool cat?

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This was average at best. The multis look like...you're new to them.

Mac~in~the~trunk an Backin~it~up/
blastin~this~fuck for passin~me~looks/
^^^
trunk, up, fuck, looks? No. A for effort.

I'm sick~of~this~shit so stop all that that bick~er~in~bitch/
I'll hunt ya ass down and graze ya grid~with~a~brick/
^^^
Good.

yep im talkin~ta~you ill be robbin~ya~dames poppin~the~flame/
^^^
talkin~ta~you doesn't go with anything. Fix.

step back hater what'chu starin~at~bitch?/
i aint a magician but i know a few disappear~in~tricks/
^^^
starin, disappearin. Yeah, those don't rhyme.

My advice is...lose the "~~~~". I did them for a long time. Look you know you do multis, if they don't catch it, that's them. They're idiots if they don't catch'em. Stop separating multis by syllables, that's not correct multis. Even though I do multis perfect, I read the multis tutorial on here and it's actually pretty good. Read it. It'll give some good pointers. Another thing, don't come at me for my constructive criticism. You entitled this "multifest". Well a "multifest" wouldn't have received anything but positive feed if done correctly. Stay up.

-Skyll-

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