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Old 11-11-06, 01:04 AM   #1
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Mimesis battle verse...

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I've had this verse since like August. Mimesis wouldn't battle me. Slut. So since he won't battle Skyll, I'll share his humiliation with the "rhymers" here.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236882
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236699

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*Nemesis: An opponent that cannot be beaten or overcome.
**Münchhausen's Syndrome: syndrome consisting of feigning acute and dramatic illness for which no clinical evidence is ever found; a pathetic person in need of attention.
***http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/ind...a1-aac25a93804b
****Austin’s still in school - Class of 2007, lmao.
*****On his myspace, said he’d change his page to a music page to upload tracks he had done. It’s past June 15th which is around where he said he’d have’em up. Now there’s no evidence that he said it at all. LMAO.
******austin’s AIM is “heykalashnikov” which he treated it like he talks to a gun like private pile did in full metal jacket.
*******Mimesis: 1.The appearance of symptoms of a disease not actually present, often caused by hysteria
********Mimesis: 2. To imitate human nature.
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Old 11-11-06, 01:12 AM   #2
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i thought it was decent rhyme sceam was off at some points but still decent my nigg an thanx for the feed keep up

oh n drop some feed on the bitch wordplay lol shamless self promotion lol
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Old 11-11-06, 02:46 AM   #3
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Rofl, yeah, I ducked that garbage. Get the fuck out of here, cock boy.
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Old 11-11-06, 11:45 PM   #4
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Rofl, yeah, I ducked that garbage. Get the fuck out of here, cock boy.



ROTLMAO!!! That was kind of arms son...The dude did put all that effort into wanting to battle u
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Old 11-11-06, 11:35 PM   #5
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Nah Austin, you ducked what you couldn't beat. You know, since you're a holder of a loss free record. That's what you told theory, your protege'. It's so easy to turn away what you can't handle. This shit is like....a paraplegic riding a bike....it just won't happen. Damn.
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Old 11-12-06, 12:33 AM   #6
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lmao....i have no comment for this
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Old 11-12-06, 12:52 AM   #7
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Nah, I put the effort in battling a GASSED rook who agreed to battle me, but his ass must've came to realize, he couldn't handle a loss.
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Old 11-12-06, 01:09 AM   #8
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lololol....i aint givin you props this shit waaaasss weaaakkk
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Old 11-13-06, 12:15 PM   #9
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Trey MethodZ
lololol....i aint givin you props this shit waaaasss weaaakkk


LMAO. I heard the rat pack anthem. I don't want props from you nickels, m.i.c., trey meth...whatever the fuk you feel like being called.

And Mindstate. You obviously do NOT know what a punchline is. I had some punchlines in there. If I put my "out of this world complex wordplay punches" in there, then I'll be told by all the lame fucks that I don't have any because they were too dumb to catch them. In a different piece, I was told I had too many metaphors. LMAOOOOOOOO fuckin' idiots. I have EVERY aspect mastered....hands down like it's half past 6.
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Old 11-12-06, 02:21 AM   #10
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rhyme scheme was off the top...flow was real good...but it completely lacked punchlines so from now on make that ur main priority ta work on the rest u got down good u just gotta give it punchlines THEN it'll be a battle verse
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Old 11-13-06, 12:50 PM   #11
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Hand's Up like it's 12
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Old 11-13-06, 12:50 PM   #12
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Skillz: You better Hide this verse Enlightend Bites it then Recycles it on another site
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Old 11-13-06, 02:06 PM   #13
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Thanks for that tip.
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^-=!~I was checkin' my *reflection*, i'm just as *dope* as *coke on mirrorz*~!=-^
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Old 11-16-06, 12:28 PM   #14
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^^^^lmao...coming from somone that thinks this is the line of the century =*~:::...
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your opinion doesnt count as anything
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Old 11-16-06, 12:54 PM   #15
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Meh.......




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