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Old 11-24-06, 02:56 AM   #1
Blackmage
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The Last Hurrah

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Ok...so the vocals on the TI part are fucked but are still just as good. This is the ending to my first cd which i will be finishing up soon. Ladies and Gentlemen...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=303064

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237480 D boy
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237519 Who's that
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237444 Who i'm is
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Old 11-24-06, 08:32 AM   #2
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needy physician? ok...that's new


sounds like u battlin...is that it?

energy is high here

flow isn't bad at all...

slick with this beat....kind a bangin


liked this


And, that switch up had me up boppin my head and dancin around the room...Man, I'd murder that beat!

HOT


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Old 11-24-06, 09:54 AM   #3
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what i liked?

-the lyrics

-emotion

- the intro

-your rhyme scheme

what i wasnt sure if i liked it or not?

-the flow...cos it slipped off at some spots!

-the beat..cos its not not my taste but seems iight!

what i didnt like?

-the quality...not even a lil to be honest with u

- the vocals werent decently mixed yo...the volume didnt seem minimumly worked on..u went loud at some spots, then lower at some spots and then LOUD at other spots...shud have amplifyed the waves a lil..

-the dubs covered ur actual vocals too...

-the switch was nice but just TOO LOUD!..

-the delivery..nneds work


...lol damn that last blast cud tear up my speakers
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Old 11-24-06, 11:20 AM   #4
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*Bows*.........
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Old 11-24-06, 06:27 PM   #5
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Listenin'...

Im feeling this shit..energy is good...delivery is hot...flow is good sumtimes packing 2 much...farewell album?..u quiiting lol...ya emotion is hot...yeah quality aint gr8 but lyrically this shit is hot..sumtimes cos of ure dubbs i cant hear ya lyrics but i heard most they crazy...oh snap he restarted this this is hawt....get at me for a collab nigga....this shit is hot...downloaded it...can u rtf..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237591

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Old 11-25-06, 02:16 PM   #6
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loving the first rhyming structure...lot's of energy...lovin the simple beat behind the emotion...nice when it drops...quality is dece...good emotion, it helps the flow...you have a good one....emotion is downed a little i woulda liked it if you kept it in...in law...great line man...start it over, man thats nice as shit, you really know how to work a beat over man, you can tell this was well thought out man, flow is sick on the neo bars...i really like this its good...you slipped a couple of times, but i liked this song man....good shit.
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Old 12-02-06, 07:01 AM   #7
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bruv...seriously get a better mic coz you are too good for the one you using at the moment...i never heard a track from ya before but this was dope...nice shit man
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