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11-25-06, 02:14 PM | #1 | ||
I'm Talented.Period.
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"Self Esteem Scheme"...new deep song from REFLECZ
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^^Click on "Self Esteem Scheme" Beat: "Come on back" Hook: Reflecz Lyrics: Verses 1 & 2 Reflecz QUALITY IS STILL COMPROMISED DUE TO LACK OF A SET UP. Concept: Rapping about how I'll keep my focus alive despite black magic being spoken over my life--i.e., negativity. LYRICS INCLUDED AT THE BOTTOM Holla 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237601 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237591 Self Esteem Verse 1 I'm like a tweeter speaker soundin' high, amplified, damn if I Start to raise my game up, the haters lay in wait to Stick dey left foot out to bring me down a level Devil's level, level with me, y'all have never met a thorough Cat, I respect the perils that bedevil me and leave me sterile Givin' birth to dreams, no longer concerned Though, I'm disturbed yo, and don't have a sign to hang Up, so they bang and buck until I hang it up Like I'm talkin' to a rude telemarketer Tha Q, had to lock him up, cuz dude was failin' lots of stuff and Suffocatin', I saw more shit than a country kid Fertile lies, hurt me like fertilizer stink I heard a certified shrink...try to sell me caca-doo And do me over, "you a loser you will never move a unit" Ooo I never knew I could do it, I can change the whole World and...live in a world where they give a shit uh Hook: 2x I can see my dream, but the past can seem To gleam past the present, I'm a bastard peasant I mean, no, but, they laugh and jester, please I'm askin' The Lord provide more before I die Lord Verse 2 Lookin' back, can suck me through a vortex Devastation, heavy laden, lower than a corvette And more death, it was my personal Dark Age I 'roamed' alone, then converted to arcane Practices, God was vain, cold and callous I stole for grain, while my soul was scattered Got it the worse about my habit to flow vain And babel like the tower, no pain, no way, I battled Rode a saddle on the horse shit, and tried to force it Before I knew it......thought of grippin' the four-fifth Hit the floor with, force, split the hemispheres equal Down the middle like latitude, now I'll film the sequel Like a drama, part 2....like Obama, I'm a vision of Alotta things possible, wirh God things are possible To he who believes, and keeps his hope like leaves Evergreen, not deciduous, never drop ya vision, uh Last edited by Reflecz : 11-25-06 at 06:50 PM. |
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11-25-06, 02:18 PM | #2 | |
Middle Weight
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Lookin' back, can suck me through a vortex
Devastation, heavy laden, lower than a corvette And more death, it was my personal Dark Age I 'roamed' alone, then converted to arcane Practices, God was vain, cold and callous I stole for grain, while my soul was scattered ^^^ ill as fuck.. You're the most talented nigga I know.
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11-25-06, 05:17 PM | #3 | ||
I'm Talented.Period.
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Preciate the feed dawg
Im sure it'll be my only feed...Shame tho...this is a damn good track fuckers |
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11-25-06, 05:23 PM | #4 | ||
One Mic
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yeerrr this is a real nice track, flows perfect on this beat, so's the delivery..lyrics are good aswell, liked the corvette line...shame about the quality, cuz this'd be absolute FIRE with sick quality, but still doesnt take much away from it...yerrr keep up the nice work
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11-25-06, 06:14 PM | #5 | ||
I'm Talented.Period.
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Thank you
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11-25-06, 07:12 PM | #7 | |
Still Sick
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^thats a dope ass mixtape cover
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11-25-06, 07:45 PM | #8 | ||
I'm Talented.Period.
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Preciate the feed El
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11-25-06, 07:54 PM | #9 | ||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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Meh......some mediocrity praising.
Your flow on the first verse wasn't really all that great. Your breath control sucked. Your delivery was nonexistant. The hook was garbage as well. Second verse was a little better, but not that great. I know I don't really need to mention it, but YOUR QUALITY SUCKS HORRIBLY!!!!!!
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11-25-06, 07:58 PM | #10 | ||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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^^your sucha damn hater man lol this tracks hot
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11-25-06, 08:00 PM | #11 | |||
I'm Talented.Period.
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no doubt bro thanx 1 |
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11-25-06, 08:24 PM | #12 | ||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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Aight......line by line
That reflex, reflex, reflex shit in the background is annoying as hell. This whole first verse sounds like you were reading it off of a crayon scribbled paper. You sound like you're trying to force a swag with it too. Your hook sounds like it would have been better if you replaced your first verse with it. Your dubs are off in the second verse, but you did pick up the flow a bit. And to be totally honest, if you weren't known on this board at all you would be getting exactly what I just said from everyone. The fact that you're a known crybaby ruins any chance at you getting any good feedback EXCEPT from those who could care less about you. So take it for what it's worth and elevate
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11-25-06, 08:25 PM | #13 | |
New to RV
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Wow man this song was hot i don't care what ppl are gonna say, the lyrics were bangin and your flow was off the hook, keep it up man.
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11-25-06, 08:34 PM | #14 | ||
I'm Talented.Period.
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^^Preciate the love bro
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11-25-06, 09:18 PM | #15 | ||
Put Yo Money On Me
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Ight track. Yea, quality killed it. No hate, but hook was pure trash to me. First verse sounded like you were reading off a paper, no flow or swag there that I really like that jumped out at me. 2nd verse, you started off great. Flow was on point, lyrics was nice, and with out reading tha lyrics, I understood what you were saying. Nice track tho, no hate from me, just keep doing you and you gunna get alot better. Elevation is the key. Just not something I would bump in tha whip.
And, I usually could care less about people, but Egyma is a straight ass hole. I wanted to say that, but I wanted to listen to his music before I did such a thing. And now the thought stands.
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