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Old 12-08-06, 06:06 PM   #1
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"We Got To Flow" ... MY BEST TRACK YET!!!

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Old 12-08-06, 06:51 PM   #2
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aint heard from ya in a while...

ok beat is iight..i'm feeling it but it dosentsound so so gd as in quality wise

you are steady with your flow,delivery is iight but cud be worked on a lil bit!
emotion is on point...and your mixing seems ok...volume is iight and all that!.

hook is quite catchy and sound ok!
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Old 12-08-06, 07:00 PM   #3
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feeling it bro. one thing i would do is record in segmants cause your presence falls off were most needed.
Also your breaths are mad clear, get a rid a them straight away.

Definitly a decent track bro.
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Old 12-08-06, 07:17 PM   #4
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no doubt yall... preciate the feed
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Old 12-09-06, 12:32 AM   #5
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missed the lyrics on this

flow sounds good

beat is aiight...

something about the feel of this track that lacks excitement


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Old 12-09-06, 04:32 AM   #6
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aint heard from you in a while. intro sounds wack. hook is cool. turn it up maybe just a little.

verse comes in. you come in with a lot of energy. sounds alright so far. at parts it sounds a little choppy.

i can hear you taking your breaths a little too much. you might want to fix that

flow falls off a couple of spots in the second verse..lyrics were ehh. nothing special.
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Old 12-11-06, 11:25 AM   #7
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Old 12-11-06, 06:39 PM   #8
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I like pretty much most, of this.. except for those big dragon breaths you be dropping into the mic, I can hear them all.
But I do the same thing, just not as intense as u
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Old 12-25-06, 07:54 PM   #9
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im feelin the flow....u got that nice commercial sound...get it behind a little bit better of quality.......then wow this would be a really hot joint no lie
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Old 12-27-06, 10:50 AM   #10
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this was nice, you do got a good commercial sound, your voice flows wells over the beat. I agree with above, your breaths are very strong at times, not as bad as Immotal Technique, but still obvious. Lyricly its very nice, not amazing, but they are very solid.

The hook is hot, it is catchy and makes it memorable. The beat is also fits very well for the track.

This is what hip-hop needs more of, you have a commercial appeal with the voice, beat, and hook, but the lyrics still have meaning and still sound great.

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