ya ok
i'm going like 10
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3127392
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3127394
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3127395
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3127396

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accomplishments:

being better than you @ life x9.

yep..check

10 it is.

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Virgin ass bastard, you probably wouldn't even know where to stick it
and son you're not serious..your whole personas a fucking gimmick
O RLY? Kinda dumb shit is that, it's obvious that u already lost
But I won't school you cuz it's clear that your spelling's a lost cause
hey fagboy, you're done..im like a tiger, watch me pounce
&you're not a no name...just a name that nobody can even pronounce
Your names the laughingstock of LBL, go head and throw in the towel
Cuz your broke ass was too poor to even buy a motherfucking vowel
Tis' the season 2 be jolly..so ill be happy 2 beat u in a league OR tournament
But no girls wanna chill with this guy cuz of where he hangs his ornaments

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accomplishments:

being better than you @ life x9.

check out his sig, n' i can already tell this kids the worse..
and yea yea we'll all die..but we gotta see your verse first..
come to slaughter you kid..and beat you by all means..
n' ill give you a gap so big wireless will be sellin jeans...
hmm..easy win fag..every1 knows i got this win in the bag..
cuz i see ya got more bust lines than a victoria secret mag..
ya joined rb around me, but ya havnt done anything more then i did
n' see i skimmed your whole verses..n' couldnt find 2% i liked kid
ya know man, my brains kinda fucked right now..LBL? i aint gotta a clue
see im starting to get spaced out, putting me on a different level than you

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go ahead and vote...

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yeah, what he said.

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accomplishments:

being better than you @ life x9.

O RLY? Kinda dumb shit is that, it's obvious that u already lost
But I won't school you cuz it's clear that your spelling's a lost cause

VS.

come to slaughter you kid..and beat you by all means..
n' ill give you a gap so big wireless will be sellin jeans...
hmm..easy win fag..every1 knows i got this win in the bag..
cuz i see ya got more bust lines than a victoria secret mag..



This just has the feel of a quick keystyle battle. Neither of you dropped anything incredible but the battle was at least worth a once over read. Some of the concepts you both were using are played, and I think Wireless tried too hard to use nameplays in his bars. Most of his punches came off choppy sounding and shit. O had a couple of nice bars and overall his verse was better quality with better punches.

V/ - O RLY?

hey fagboy, you're done..im like a tiger, watch me pounce
&you're not a no name...just a name that nobody can even pronounce
vs
come to slaughter you kid..and beat you by all means..
n' ill give you a gap so big wireless will be sellin jeans...
hmm..easy win fag..every1 knows i got this win in the bag..
cuz i see ya got more bust lines than a victoria secret mag..

pretty inconsistant battle. both came on and off. orly had the better lines of thebattle though. like wireless was droppin punches that werent really harsh at all. gap line from o rly was cool

vote o rly

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hey fagboy, you're done..im like a tiger, watch me pounce
&you're not a no name...just a name that nobody can even pronounce
Your names the laughingstock of LBL, go head and throw in the towel
Cuz your broke ass was too poor to even buy a motherfucking vowel

vs.

come to slaughter you kid..and beat you by all means..
n' ill give you a gap so big wireless will be sellin jeans...
hmm..easy win fag..every1 knows i got this win in the bag..
cuz i see ya got more bust lines than a victoria secret mag..

This battle was okay, I wasn't really feeling the gap line. the O'rly name punches from Wireless made me laugh and were coo'

V/ Wireless

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hey fagboy, you're done..im like a tiger, watch me pounce
&you're not a no name...just a name that nobody can even pronounce

vs

Nothing

This battle was poor, I'm gonna be honest guys. The wording was weak at best. and the played concepts were bounteous in number. Mindless had some okish lines but the majority of his verse wasn't great to be honest, and O Rly's verse was just plain weak. The gap punch could have been good but the wording was spung, as was the victoria secrets line. Wireless just really needs to work on his wording, but O Rly needs to try and bring fresher concepts and execute them better.

V/ Wireless

check out his sig, n' i can already tell this kids the worse..
and yea yea we'll all die..but we gotta see your verse first..

vs.

nothing...

weak battle as expected. Some good concepts that were definetly drop'd wrong.
You should work on wording and creativity. I have the same problems some times. You aint terrible so you just need to stick around a bit to elevate.

V/ O Rly?

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

hey fagboy, you're done..im like a tiger, watch me pounce
&you're not a no name...just a name that nobody can even pronounce
Your names the laughingstock of LBL, go head and throw in the towel
Cuz your broke ass was too poor to even buy a motherfucking vowel

vs

hmm..easy win fag..every1 knows i got this win in the bag..
cuz i see ya got more bust lines than a victoria secret mag..

not that great of a battle but i think wireless had the harder punches that were worded better than orly.just an average battle overall

vote/wireless

Virgin ass bastard, you probably wouldn't even know where to stick it
and son you're not serious..your whole personas a fucking gimmick
ok
O RLY? Kinda dumb shit is that, it's obvious that u already lost
But I won't school you cuz it's clear that your spelling's a lost cause
lol
hey fagboy, you're done..im like a tiger, watch me pounce
&you're not a no name...just a name that nobody can even pronounce
mehl
Your names the laughingstock of LBL, go head and throw in the towel
Cuz your broke ass was too poor to even buy a motherfucking vowel
haha
Tis' the season 2 be jolly..so ill be happy 2 beat u in a league OR tournament
But no girls wanna chill with this guy cuz of where he hangs his ornaments
ok

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check out his sig, n' i can already tell this kids the worse..
and yea yea we'll all die..but we gotta see your verse first..
nah
come to slaughter you kid..and beat you by all means..
n' ill give you a gap so big wireless will be sellin jeans...
lol
hmm..easy win fag..every1 knows i got this win in the bag..
cuz i see ya got more bust lines than a victoria secret mag..
ok
ya joined rb around me, but ya havnt done anything more then i did
n' see i skimmed your whole verses..n' couldnt find 2% i liked kid
no
ya know man, my brains kinda fucked right now..LBL? i aint gotta a clue
see im starting to get spaced out, putting me on a different level than you
ok

This was a decent battle ..but I got Wireless taking the win barely. His punches were just a little bit harsher and he came more consistant. Both keep battling.

Vote - Wireless

O RLY? Kinda dumb shit is that, it's obvious that u already lost
But I won't school you cuz it's clear that your spelling's a lost cause

VS.

come to slaughter you kid..and beat you by all means..
n' ill give you a gap so big wireless will be sellin jeans...
hmm..easy win fag..every1 knows i got this win in the bag..
cuz i see ya got more bust lines than a victoria secret mag..

Cool battle here. Both came fairly decent here. wireless your verse seemed rushed or really half assed & so did O Rly. Both had some nice punche's that were fairly decent though. Wireless had slacked some of his wording which made it seem rushed while O Rly had the edge with it. O Rly you had somewhat of a solid verse while some punche's had thrown you off. Wirless your verse was'nt as consistent here though. I felt O Rly came off a bit more effective with more direct/consistent punche's here.

V - O Rly?

EDIT: More of an explanation for Wireless.