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Old 12-17-06, 09:37 AM   #1
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19. Final (1-0) vs. 20. TEF (5-5)

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Old 12-17-06, 01:49 PM   #2
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Old 12-18-06, 02:40 PM   #3
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Old 12-20-06, 07:00 PM   #4
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Who The Fuckz Tef?


^ ^Me & his mom didn’t work I bounced! no props I’m givin these sluts
Him not knowing me I had a Knee-Jerk reaction …Final got kicked in his nuts
Hoes like my SUV on 20’s, Final’s too broke he can’t score
But he does have a Cool whip
this bum stole his from the Grocery store
I’m 5-5 he’s ranked 19th and I’m 20th but I’ll attack this rival
My 50% may be bad on test, but I’m still good E-nuff to pass this Final
Dissin my wins and losses is now Feeding & Name plays I seen him spit's bunk
He should give me the 2 vote lead
His personals are good quotes... of SHIT THAT SUCK!
He so gay, a guy robbed this fag and Final wanted to ravage the man
It didn't happen in Time Square but he still wanted what the Manhattan his pants
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Old 12-21-06, 11:32 PM   #5
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Some one give me an example of what couda got worded better cause i'm lookin and my rhyme scheme and set ups and I guees I'm not seein what everbody seein as far as the wording. I'm not tyna sway, I Just wanna know Cause everybody sayin the same thing.


1.Comedian
2.John Hensley
3.Ace Heratoga
4.DaTrusHurtz

Tef really opened my eyes to relize things that i restlessly doubted
He showed me theres more to losing - theres crying n questionin about it
But dont worry, your gettin` better dood, your earnin` your place
as the guy in the league that gets whored by every decent textcee u face
N` ur verse is a waste, all the stuff you drop is gettin more and more played
So fuck the dumbshit - and no tef, that doesnt mean you`re getting laid
I`m a good cook, step back virgin or i`ll be forced to bake ya, fag
But in order to make T ef - u need 3 kegs of beer, some vodka n` a paper bag

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EDIT: I Forgot The List Of Poeple Under The Quote.

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Old 12-22-06, 03:29 AM   #6
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Vote Up.
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Old 12-22-06, 10:47 AM   #7
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I’m 5-5 he’s ranked 19th and I’m 20th but I’ll attack this rival
My 50% may be bad on test, but I’m still good E-nuff to pass this Final
He so gay, a guy robbed this fag and Final wanted to ravage the man
It didn't happen in Time Square but he still wanted what the Manhattan his pants

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N` ur verse is a waste, all the stuff you drop is gettin more and more played
So fuck the dumbshit - and no tef, that doesnt mean you`re getting laid
I`m a good cook, step back virgin or i`ll be forced to bake ya, fag
But in order to make T ef - u need 3 kegs of beer, some vodka n` a paper bag


Tef came out way harder throughout this battle, even tha Final had some decent punches he could have worded them better

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Old 12-22-06, 03:07 PM   #8
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Yea, I Threw It Together Late Last Night So He Didnt Waste A Verse.

And So I Didnt Know Show.

But Its Ok.

0-1 Good Drop Tef.
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Old 12-22-06, 08:08 PM   #9
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Tef really opened my eyes to relize things that i restlessly doubted
He showed me theres more to losing - theres crying n questionin about it
N` ur verse is a waste, all the stuff you drop is gettin more and more played
So fuck the dumbshit - and no tef, that doesnt mean you`re getting laid
^funny.


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He so gay, a guy robbed this fag and Final wanted to ravage the man
It didn't happen in Time Square but he still wanted what the Manhattan his pants
^sumwhat forced but stil pretty coo..

overall/-decent battle,nothing really astounding..but still i got finals takin this by 2 lines..thas it

v/-Finals
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Old 12-22-06, 08:52 PM   #10
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1-1

Thnx People.
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Old 12-22-06, 10:29 PM   #11
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I feel bad doing this, considering that verse from final was obviously a quick one.. but I nhave to go with Final. he didn't mess around with nameplays.. he went straight for the jugular, meaning although his disses weren't the greatest, they were direct. Most of them were aight though. The closer was blah. TEF tried too hard for the nameplays, that weren't witty to me. sorry man

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Old 12-22-06, 11:21 PM   #12
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Mother Fucker ^.
Playin Gears Of War.

But 2-1.
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Old 12-23-06, 02:19 AM   #13
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He so gay, a guy robbed this fag and Final wanted to ravage the man
It didn't happen in Time Square but he still wanted what the Manhattan his pants

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Tef really opened my eyes to relize things that i restlessly doubted
He showed me theres more to losing - theres crying n questionin about it
N` ur verse is a waste, all the stuff you drop is gettin more and more played
So fuck the dumbshit - and no tef, that doesnt mean you`re getting laid

meh battle, both came meh but final came better

v/final
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Old 12-23-06, 02:30 AM   #14
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Old 12-23-06, 02:35 PM   #15
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Thnx 3-1

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