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Old 12-30-06, 11:03 AM   #1
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Exclamation It's MAD DOG AGAIN PEOPLE...Track Name..."Poor"

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Old 12-30-06, 11:05 AM   #2
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Yea...

heard this on AIM

slick beat

ur tone on it fits well

could clearly hear ur lyrics


quality joint





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Old 12-30-06, 12:26 PM   #3
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I like ure intro lol..u talking 2 to her..vocals a lil low..

I like ure delivery it's more talkative, but sometimes you don't make sense..like youre sentences isnt constructed right...sumtimes ure delivery is a lil TOO much for it..lol like thta hugh hefner line..rofl at erection goofball...yeah flow is aiight...sumtimes 2 much words in there...holla..1
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Old 01-01-07, 01:51 AM   #4
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This Is Probably One Of Ur Best Traks Since The Clarity Is There And Ur Delivery And Lyircs Matched Aswell I Dont Agree With The The Sentences Didn T Fit Since Everything U Said I Understood No Doubt Mad Deezle Holla Atcha Boy Rtf On Tha Last Blast Home Boy
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Old 01-02-07, 05:44 PM   #5
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will do man cheers for the feed so far peoples i'll hit ya tracks up as soon as I'm on my comp at work...I'm on my net thru my phone but i'll definitely rtf guys
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Old 01-29-07, 07:44 AM   #6
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uppin and i'll RTF on any outstanding tracks zu tag
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Old 01-29-07, 03:34 PM   #7
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intros ok..
like the way the beat drops in, feeling this beat. Qualitys the best ive heard from you, no more capcom mic? lol.

Hooks cool, some ok energy.. lol @ "stingy cunt" I havent heard that saying for years. wOOt!!

adlibs are decent on this, this hooks cool bro, wasnt feeling it at first, but after a couple a loops its cool.

Whats the beat

oveall best ive heard from you, even though i aint heard much
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Old 01-30-07, 06:57 AM   #8
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^ lol @ capcom mic...socom mic...and its logitech 350 USB headset now not the socom mic...but word man cheers holla @ me and i'll drop the beat to ya
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Old 01-30-07, 08:47 AM   #9
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okay not feeling the intro...hmmm ya quality has improved since I last heard you....ya verse u open weak....when u start a verse u wanna capture the listeners attention right away....I cant lie I jus coasted thru til ya hook on verse 1 u were technically sound but ya REALLY!!!! lack presence, hook same prob I was 4 bars in before I even realized it was hook....damn I am having trouble feeding this song cuz I jus is not holding my attention....yes you flowed properly, ya delivery was good....but u lack that swag, charisma, presence, conviction...to keep anyone interested...to sum up this song it was technically solid but boring, IMO has no replay value....u really need to focus on ya showmanship an liven ya raps up man...decent track son but def needs alot of touching up....no hate jus realness.....1
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Old 01-30-07, 09:12 AM   #10
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okay not feeling the intro...hmmm ya quality has improved since I last heard you....ya verse u open weak....when u start a verse u wanna capture the listeners attention right away....I cant lie I jus coasted thru til ya hook on verse 1 u were technically sound but ya REALLY!!!! lack presence, hook same prob I was 4 bars in before I even realized it was hook....damn I am having trouble feeding this song cuz I jus is not holding my attention....yes you flowed properly, ya delivery was good....but u lack that swag, charisma, presence, conviction...to keep anyone interested...to sum up this song it was technically solid but boring, IMO has no replay value....u really need to focus on ya showmanship an liven ya raps up man...decent track son but def needs alot of touching up....no hate jus realness.....1


not taken as hate bruv...appreciate it and i'll definitely take it into account next time
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Old 01-30-07, 11:40 AM   #11
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outstanding tracks lol okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk maddizzle
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Old 01-31-07, 09:38 AM   #12
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RTF'd on a track b thanks again for the feedback
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i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.

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Old 01-31-07, 02:49 PM   #13
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sample in the begining is nice...beats funkey..............quality is their, theirs a hiss but i think its the beat...concepts good...keepin it real.....hooks nice....can relate to a lota this....good shit man
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