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03-15-07, 04:46 PM
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Big Picture- "THizz izz IT"
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lil club joint... chorus and verses are me
.. tell me if u hear any hissing or any other quality problems .. any other chritisism also welcome.. other than that enjoy .. link to song.VVV http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=290249 .. .. .. feed.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240606 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239627
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03-15-07, 06:52 PM
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illmatic shoulda dropped this at my crib. i got that one track almost done... be ez i'm going to mount p tonight pce
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03-15-07, 07:05 PM
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good deal.. but how bout the other track, the money one? if that aint done u should post what u got.
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03-15-07, 07:16 PM
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IP:
your hiss is less then usual. It just sounds to compressed, not to much but its alright. I like your adlibs though. Your quality is decent for the type mic you usin if its a computer mic. Not sure but your flow is pretty good man. delivery is decent, you could went a lil more hype with it. Hook is catchy and it flows well, nice hook. I like this track man probably your best track. Only thing sounds weird is your intro cause you have no emotion when you sayin it. overall not bad duke
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...650#post3150650
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03-15-07, 08:18 PM
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nah, its the co1u mic. how can i fixed that too compressed deal, and what does that mean?... good thinkin bout the begining, i'll go back and fix that tomorrow. and i'll rtf tomorrow aswell, im watchin college ball. but thanx for sure
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03-16-07, 09:15 AM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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"It's ya boy"...sounded unconvincing...
beat and vocal levels are so quiet I am completely repulsed by most club songs now...So, I'm not a fan of this style. ur delivery is lackluster...need more energy decent sounding track...but lacks hypeness for the genre 1 |
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