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Old 03-29-07, 01:27 PM   #1
DaTrusHurtz
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5. Wireless (4-3) vs. 6. tiggobitties (2-1)

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G.B.A
Gimmick Battle Association


March Madness Battles

You will be assigned a school that participated in March Madness. The goal of this battle is to diss your opponent's school with basketball related punches. However, you may also throw non-basketball related punches at your opponent's school if you choose to. Good Luck.

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Wireless - Tennessee Volunteers

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tiggobitties - Vanderbilt Commodores


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Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific
10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit
Biting = Ban
Feeding = -2 Votes
Swaying = DQ
Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links
Votes Due Wednesday Night
New Battles Up Thursday Morning
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Old 03-30-07, 05:59 PM   #2
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Old 04-02-07, 06:24 PM   #3
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uhm...i thought i signed out
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Old 04-02-07, 06:24 PM   #4
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o well ill drop sumthin ne wayz
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Old 04-02-07, 06:25 PM   #5
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Nope, u didn't. Why don't you at least write a quick 10 lines for this and you can signout after that so you don't no-show
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Old 04-02-07, 09:13 PM   #6
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thats alright...i was just signin out for spring break but now its over so sall good
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Old 04-02-07, 09:53 PM   #7
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u cant beat us now and you never could
lets "face" it every one "sleeps while your dribbling"...
.........cuz your no good*
u from tennesee you dont just play wit ya fam...
........on the court
yall incest, accordin to ya sig you the best....
.......at the wrong sport
we aint got flow? cmon we the commodores....
.....born in the sea
and ya cant be wireless cuz everyone in tennessee.....
.....is still stuck wit black and white t.v.
anyone can tell were better by our alphabetical stats
sure T comes before V but isnt the best saved for last
u not on my level...couldnt reach my "rim" with a stilt
and this is my house you used to "rv".....
.....but now you in the "VAN-we-BILT"**

*people dribble or droll on their face when they sleep
**rv/van...get it?
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Old 04-02-07, 10:04 PM   #8
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lollllllll

tennessee, we're known for running the gridirons and courts
while vanderbilt.. yall are known for being fucking dorks
our coach is the shit, dont fuck with us, dummies
only pearls you guys touch are all your schools fucking money
dont fuck wit ya boys, we on a whole notha dimension
gotta add a T to the V for yalls asses to even get attention
chris?he's a verb.. we'll lofton yall's weak ass...
while vandy.. lofton.. s of fucking shots that never hit the glass
look at your tounry finish.. G'town smoked yall
its about time yall 3 and oute'd something besides football
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Old 04-02-07, 10:07 PM   #9
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lol at both of our T and V lines... gluck
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Old 04-02-07, 10:10 PM   #10
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my bad didnt even read ur verse
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Old 04-03-07, 07:13 AM   #12
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u from tennesee you dont just play wit ya fam...
........on the court
yall incest, accordin to ya sig you the best....
.......at the wrong sport
we aint got flow? cmon we the commodores....
.....born in the sea
and ya cant be wireless cuz everyone in tennessee.....
.....is still stuck wit black and white t.v.

vss

tennessee, we're known for running the gridirons and courts
while vanderbilt.. yall are known for being fucking dorks
our coach is the shit, dont fuck with us, dummies
only pearls you guys touch are all your schools fucking money
dont fuck wit ya boys, we on a whole notha dimension
gotta add a T to the V for yalls asses to even get attention

Got Wireless takein it wit 1 more quoteablethat I liked...

V// Wireless
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Old 04-03-07, 11:01 AM   #13
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u from tennesee you dont just play wit ya fam...
........on the court
yall incest, accordin to ya sig you the best....
.......at the wrong sport

vs.

our coach is the shit, dont fuck with us, dummies
only pearls you guys touch are all your schools fucking money
chris?he's a verb.. we'll lofton yall's weak ass...
while vandy.. lofton.. s of fucking shots that never hit the glass

Really up and down battle, the 3 lines I quoted were all solid quotables, real nice, but everything else I read was ehh. Tiggo, u reallllly gotta fix ur structure. With doin' the ... thing, u can do that for a punchline, but never do that for a setup. Do it more like this

Blah blah blah blah blah blah
blah blah blah ...
... blah blah blah

Ur way is confusing and hurts the flow of the diss. Ur sig diss was nice, but everything else was either played or forced. The fact that u had to explain some of ur shit shows that, u should never explain punches. If they don't make sense without u explaning it, they're no good. Wireless, u had a few nice nameplays with the Lofton and Bruce Pearl thing. Everything else u had I felt was kinda basic. Like the opener and closer. They're dorks, that coulda been about anyone. So could the 3 and out thing. You had a few cool lines though and didn't come as forced so u got this.

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Old 04-04-07, 09:22 PM   #14
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u from tennesee you dont just play wit ya fam...
........on the court
yall incest, accordin to ya sig you the best....
.......at the wrong sport

[vs]

our coach is the shit, dont fuck with us, dummies
only pearls you guys touch are all your schools fucking money
chris?he's a verb.. we'll lofton yall's weak ass...
while vandy.. lofton.. s of fucking shots that never hit the glass




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Old 04-05-07, 12:24 AM   #15
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wow, i really didnt see any quotables. seems wireless either half-assed or rushed his verse while tb had no structure whatsoever. not to mention he had horrible wording so....

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