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04-13-07, 12:44 AM
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The Paragraph President
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The iLLusionists - On A Quest (will rtf)
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www.soundclick.com/paranoidcan
1st verse: Para hook: Para 2nd verse: Yung Red hook: Para i did my verse awhile ago, its kinda old but i was happy with my come out. anyway let me know what yall think. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3158621 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3158614
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04-13-07, 05:16 AM
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Flyweight
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IP:
yo that beat is smooth some real shit you can get lost in the chorus is smooth and so is the intro they match perfectly with the beat. as for the verses the first verse starts of a little slow then you had to speed thrue a small peace but after that it was nice perty good lyrics the 2nd verse it just didnt seem to match the track as much as the first verse but there was steel good lyrics. nice job on the song though I really dig it stay up
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04-14-07, 02:24 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP:
real bangin beat...ur swagger fits it on here...it just makes it.
flow was decent...u didn't "murder" the beat but it was good slick soundin track 1 |
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