http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3163116
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3163112

Young Chosen aka tha Prince well ya'll know who "Chosen Is"*
But Big Ax D might not cuz he know me as tha Killa Kid
Nigga That Rep Tha Sip, That Got Guns That'll Split ya wig
Fuck Multi's I aint feelin like spittin right at tha movement
I'm just ready to battle so I'm lookin for Opponents
But hell somebody prolly scared, computer geeks fuckin nerds
Claimin you sell rocks knowin you aint never stood on a fuckin cruve
Sellin Birds, stackin money just becasue ya mufuckin pockets hurt
Half these niggaz claimin they real, claimin they trill
Sick of these half ass rappers steppin up claimin they ill
I got something that'll eat ya face, and if ya niggaz trippin I'll give them a taste
Of tha 40 caliber, my aim's impeccable n I aim to damage ya
I'm a retired pro, a vet of tha Rap Forums ya'll niggaz is Amateurs
Hell I seen most of ya battles ya bars weak as fuck my lil sister could handle you
I'm back bitch n you cant stot tha TakeOva
Lay Fear you ill ass fuck in my eyes so lets give this site a lil make over


I aint even spittin hard.... trust me... o yea no punchlines... I just wanted to flow today... no disrespect to nobody I was just spittin but I do wanna battle somebody.... anybody damn get at me.... Chosen aka Young Sin.. n for Ax Dawg tha Kid

*Chosen Is was that long as drop that I Posted a While Back

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I'm Sicker Than Tha Plauges That God Sent Moses-Chosen

nice shit man not the best ive seen from u but u all ready stated that....but hey i'll battle u....set it up....~1~

I have no clue on how to set battles up

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I'm Sicker Than Tha Plauges That God Sent Moses-Chosen

Yea..this is got some flow..thats about it..even that is stretched a little...like you said thuogh..even if its practice..throw ya best at it..and keep it comin...

Stay up though...just work a little..

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iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

nice drop it actully kinda like my style straight gutta and raw i like it kid...
ya flow good, creativeness was aight could of been better but it was still good so dont get me wrong...
punches wasnt really there but then again a few was not a bad verse keep droping them hard gutta raw bars im feeling that....

pm me for a collabo or something kid word up.....

holla at me....

good drop..

ok this ok... really basic. not top of the line but not bad and there is room for improvement. no worrys. some lines were good and i liked them. others didnt rhyme... or i was off flow... but no matters it was still good. not bad but not great either... work on that flow... and keep droping kid.

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im so ill that cancer thinks im its father.

typo.................

u ment "KEY"style

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!