http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4716673

I know the beat is off hte 8th mile sound track i believe.
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I peeped this, always liked this beat. Em, Obie, and 50 i think?

you come in coo, good flow, delivery good. It's just I think maybe emotion could be upped a lil nah mean? sounds too monotone, like your lyrics tight, but if you put more emotion behind it, to show you really meaning it and stuff it would of been so much better. But I really liking the flow you at man. Quality coo lol stand up upright like an erection haha

but overall good shit man, just work on emotion shit and shit will turn out better man...

8/10


EZ

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thanks for the feed back...i never thought lack of emotion be something i would of heard for improvement but i do get what u sayin lol... at times i tend to stetch my words out a bit too much wit certain flows. ill keep at it. Thanks man for peeping it. ~1~