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Beat: Hi fly

Hook: Q

Verses: 1-3, Q



Concept: alternate possibilities



Holla


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241840
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241828

Damn....song forum getting no love anymore.

Singing in the beginning was pretty mediocre. I think it was intended to be monotone though. You ain't got the same swag and delivery in this one as you usually do. You sound more like you're reading than rapping. I think you should either raise the singing in the hook or lower the ad libs a bit. Flow is on point through the whole song, but I'm just not feeling this song from you as much as I do some others

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intro is cool...feelin this beat.

singing needs to be lowered..a lot.

i have to agree with enygma on this one..not feelin it as much as i do other songs. sounds like you were lazy with this one.

second verse flow is a lot more interesting than the first..keeps me listening closer.


it was okay..but for you it just sounds like you kinda slackin with this one.