second post here
still kinda new at dis so leave sum good feedbak
thanks

lyrics-

torn hearts and deep scars are my natural allies/
no matter how far i escape my life is still teeming with lies/
my skin-pourous so the poison has reached my soul/
tainted me--forever indulging, eating away sanity/
my life-transformed into blasphemy-/
my version of ecstacy has now taking it's toll/
stimulated passion raging inside my heart/
the feeling of animosity tearing my inner shadow apart/
my versage--mysterious delirious with sorrowful expression/
camoflauging my identity commited to hide the fact/
that my life is messed up so i can keep my honor intact/
somtimes i would just pray for some divine intervention/
asking for sacred teachings of truth to enlighten me/
to make me bouyant so i can float above the enemies/
i ask for angels to release me from an eternity in hell/
release me forever cuz now im stuck in a shell/
but then i finally see the answer/
i cant just rely on another/
just waiting for things to be better-thats not how it is/
you gotta find your reason to live-your reason to die/
united with the king in the sky/
read the bible son, cuz thats the manual/
simple lyrics, simple answers it aint controversial/
if you wanna be happy, dont take the long way just do what i say/
just a piece of advice from me, so have a good day///

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look at dis mangs, and leve sum feed peeps.

wow yall cant even leave any feed?? forget yall. come on mangs

This was alright i give u props though do sum more shit like this!

I liked it! i think its good!

This was cool i liked it make sum more and ill give umy feed on them!

i liked it
keep it up