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11-23-07, 04:50 PM
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"Unlucky"...SNIPPET of some New L.E Music
IP:
www.soundclick.com/limitededitioncan
Cheeeckkkk it out. "Unlucky" First Verse and Hook Beat by Shadowville. Let me know what you think. |
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11-23-07, 05:54 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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lol @ come hard on a track.....gotta change my pants.
This could be a tight track man. I like the hook a lot, but I think you should rerecord it a little and try to smooth it out a bit. And at that "Click bam" part in the hook you should add a good sounding gun, not a really fake one. I like the whole theme of the track though man.....good shit 
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11-23-07, 05:59 PM
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IP:
Lol thanks man.
Yeah I am throwing in some sound effects...actually what happened is that I originally recorded it in four line segments, and then when I went to save the wavs I didn't save the session. I had to put them all back, and I know I didn't get it exact...So I have to rerecord it anyway. I just thought I would throw it up now. Thanks for the feedback though man. |
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11-23-07, 06:28 PM
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IP:
You know what I love most about RV?
Getting and giving feedback for songs. So, I'll return the favour and shit. |
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11-23-07, 06:31 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP:
I know.....its a lost art on RV. I remember the days I would go to the songs page and just leave feed for everyone on the first page. Shit like that doesn't happen anymore. Ohh well man
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11-23-07, 06:45 PM
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not bad man, agree with E tho, reflow the whole verse, and try to up flow spots, etc. Also try some cadence switching as its a kinda monotone verse, which, fits the beat, but it doesn't stand out from it.
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11-23-07, 07:20 PM
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IP:
Thanks for the advice man.
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11-23-07, 07:25 PM
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Vendetta the K.O. King
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no dizzoubt. now get on msn foo.
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11-23-07, 07:29 PM
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IP:
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Lol I'm working till ten. Moonlight Madness sale.  |
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11-23-07, 08:12 PM
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Light Weight
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IP:
Hook's hot...if I had a decent mic I'd volunteer to hop on this...
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11-23-07, 08:41 PM
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IP:
Thanks man. And we can hop on a collab someday for sure.
One of the questions I actually wanted to ask is what everybody thinks of the quality...if anybody has any feedback on that, I would like to hear it for sure. |
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11-23-07, 09:25 PM
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Just searching.
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IP:
If this had a pussy I'd eat it, son. Also, just curious, do you know how to pronounce ennui? French pronounciations. I thought it was en-you-eye at first.
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11-23-07, 09:34 PM
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L.E
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IP:
"En wee"
French word. I dropped the name as soon as I found out. |
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11-23-07, 09:35 PM
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Just searching.
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IP:
En wee? I'm pretty sure it's on-we. Unless en is the same was on..mhm.
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11-23-07, 09:45 PM
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L.E
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IP:
Ahh!
You're too smart for me. -Brain Overloads- |
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