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Old 12-11-08, 12:15 PM   #1
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My contest track unfinished

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http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7139086
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leave some feed so i can fix it before i submit it.
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the link is updated, the tracks finished
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Old 12-11-08, 12:35 PM   #2
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I can't get into it, but I really hate that beat to begin with so I can't really criticize.
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Old 12-11-08, 12:58 PM   #3
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well, its the best of the three beats i think. i could spit the same lyrics on any of the beats, but i thought this was the best one.
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Old 12-11-08, 02:28 PM   #4
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I dug the first beat the most I think.
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Old 12-11-08, 07:27 PM   #5
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oh.. the worst of the 3 beats...

Umm.. i dunno man, not really digging it...

Doesent really sound like a winner......
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Old 12-11-08, 10:50 PM   #6
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Just to be completely honest, I dont think you're gonna win with that.
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Old 12-12-08, 06:34 AM   #7
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its funny you say that big P

i happen to hate the things that i hate.
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Old 12-14-08, 08:30 PM   #8
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its funny you say that big P

i happen to hate the things that i hate.

you should never hate.
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Old 12-12-08, 02:38 PM   #9
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rofl, this is the kid that wants me to battle him? weak as fuck.
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Old 12-14-08, 08:29 PM   #10
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rofl, this is the kid that wants me to battle him? weak as fuck.

then why u keep duckin homo, i've had my track done for you for over a week now
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Old 12-14-08, 08:48 PM   #11
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then why u keep duckin homo, i've had my track done for you for over a week now

Hope it doesent sound like your submission track in this thread...
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Old 12-14-08, 08:52 PM   #12
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Hope it doesent sound like your submission track in this thread...

if he ever battles me we'll all find out
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Old 12-15-08, 02:14 AM   #13
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then why u keep duckin homo, i've had my track done for you for over a week now

Why would I play chess against a connect four player?
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Old 12-15-08, 03:05 PM   #14
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Why would I play chess against a connect four player?

so now its an actual excuse to duck a battle just by saying some gay shit like that? you are a huge fag, if your so good then shut me up and drop something that would take someone of your so called talent no time to do and kill me. talking shit an not backing it up is not a good enough excuse for me, sorry but thats about the biggest bitch move in the book.
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Old 12-14-08, 09:22 PM   #15
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rofl, this is the kid that wants me to battle him? weak as fuck.




rofl

that is hands down the most ironic post i've seen on R/V in a while
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