Since everyone else posts their shit here hahaha. The 6th track i've ever recorded in my life. Chorus, verses and dubs done in one take, no mixing. Fuck it! Feel this shit if you're Irish!!!

Oh and yea, try and catch the subliminal shot ahahaha

http://www.zshare.net/audio/556311173de20d09/#

is the subliminal shot where ur taking about ladies, and there being 4 on the floor, then having ur dick in their spouse? thats kinda weird. Anyways, not really diggin it too much. woord.

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uh no the subliminal shot was at poetic

"you sorta like poetic most you gettin is phone sex"

hahaha

And it's SPOUSH atleast I think it's spelt like that haha...

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yea yea Tha Q makes a track and everyone posts in the thread and I do and no one has shit to say

you bitches

lyrics on the first verse were sick.wasnt feeling the second one.third verse was alright,voice is monotone as fuck though,and u need to turn the beat up you vocals are to loud.

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"the loudest one in the room is the weakest"- frank lucas..

and i thought u were jewish

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"the loudest one in the room is the weakest"- frank lucas..

well of course, did you not hear in the beggining when he said "I got a lot of doe you will never see josh go broke"

hahaha

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It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal...
But it's treason when you turn your back on your people.

but on the real I didn't like it delicvery was wack couldn't stand it mic preacence is bad need a better mic and someone to mix it for you.......but the lyrics were ok I guess just need to work on the delivery and mic confidence, lol it wasn't as bad as I said, and I feel ya gota work with the equipment you have.

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It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal...
But it's treason when you turn your back on your people.

Yessir, thanks a lot guys. Well I was kinda trying to be monotone on this since it's more of a commercial thing but I guess it didn't work in my favor, I don't care enough bout this to re-record with more emotion though haha. And aight thanks for letting me know the vocals are too loud, I'll remember that for my next track.

As for a better mic, im only getting one of those eventually along with the rest of my audio software I need to record better... and I don't mix my shit, don't know how, i'll learn eventually but til then my tracks got no mixing lol

how's the flow guys?

And thanks for all the criticism cheyah

And yes I'm Russian/Jew on my dads side and Irish/Scottish on my moms

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I've noticed more underground shit is monotone than commercial. Typically the reason the rappers are mainstream are because of their Delivery+Flow. But this shit is pretty boring, like it really didn't bring me into it. Delivery is something you want to work on if you're trying to something commercial. Flow was okay, but you should def work on quality and delivery. That's the biggest thing.

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Iunno fabolous and cassidy etc etc are pretty monotone, I just figured i'd go with that style, and this was semi underground semi commercial so yea

Glad the flow was ok, and I will work on my delivery but the quality aint changing anytime soon haha, i dont care

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cassidy aint monotone, montone means lifeless and one steady tone instead of expression and shit. Very few rappers can pull monotone off, Guru from gangstar and tuna fish from jurrassic 5 are the only I can think of right now. Im not saying you are doing this but most people don't speak like that, it comes out when your reading or thinking real hard about it, memorizing and relaxing helps. Find your own style what works with your voice and your breathing capabilities, really the only thing that will help it is practice.

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It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal...
But it's treason when you turn your back on your people.

Man lmao, I know what being monotone is, it's a simple word to understand. Cassidy is pretty mototone in a lot of his mainstream shit, thats my opinion and how a bunch of his stuff sounded to me, or atleast not completely monotone but a lot of monotoneness to his style, but yea

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Hahahahaha.

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rofl@the hook
josh where's ur french accent.......n did i hear u say poetic's only gettin phonesex?

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