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03-02-09, 07:12 PM | #1 | ||
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Mimesis 0-0 .vs bobericc. 1-0
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03-02-09, 07:48 PM | #2 | ||
text.even geico can do it
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checking in......
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03-02-09, 10:23 PM | #3 | ||
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You're going to get killed.
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03-04-09, 12:51 PM | #4 | |||
text.even geico can do it
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who's going to get killed?...
....(you dun fucked up)..... I'm stopping your mental, drop full potential, I'm fucking insisting my punches are hitting.. but you without 'me' is nothing but Misis.. sunning a bitch when muscle head thinks his bars are polished off.. this dumb hater gets the punch breakers like mortal kombat blocks! feeding these lines of short spars, this student aint seeing me mims your not smart, I seen your report card... it said Deedede.. rapping secretly, since 04 you've built some rep on the internet how he's got half the jump on his dick, and aint even win one yet you little bitch! so I went to the hall of names and it isn't right nick called your originality aggressive..explaining that you didn't bite! Quote:
your an animal, I can't understand it though, your seeming fake a lonely geek, the only beast in hibernation 12 seasons straight spitting heated flames, battling vets, but your verse played bitch whole life is irony, like I smack you to death with a first aid kit the worst fakeness, fuck your ego, your bars are booty bastard check your confidence, and know the meaning of over-enthusiastic truly ass kid... so fuck 80-0, and concepts from generic bitches your best battle's are crazy sets of gimmicks like the text Olympics back to this senseless killing, you prewrite the same old clout I can read you like a book... rip out your spine and pages fall out! early 20 on your ass hahaaaaa! |
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03-04-09, 11:45 PM | #5 | ||
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Who the fuck is this kid?
I'm 80-0 -- not including wins in leagues and tournaments. You're 1-0. I wrote verses 3 years ago that your best verse couldn't beat now. Get the fuck out of my face. I took a break for a long time, but the shit just doesn't seem to feel fair So I'll take another one to your neck. . . .and you can sit the next few plays out in a wheelchair The apple doesn't fall from the tree -- I know who you're around so fuck it We're only amazed by Bob, Eric when your faggot dads make out in public That shit is disgusting -- you're a lame bitch, and I'ma step to this trash Your whole style's underhanded, so it's obvious I got a leg up in this match I'm like Lebron James in the lane -- dudes just keep paying me to stroll in But no one takes charges from lyrics. . . .we'd rather let him keep slam dunking his bullshit And you're hideous too -- I'm hot, but you could make it snow in summer So many moles on his body they used his picture to define Avogadro's number That's a chemistry joke cause I'm chemically dope -- just smashin' dudes I'll make you bail out this tourney so fast GM will come chasing after you As soon as I checked in came 200 views, dog, this nerd is just hopeless My comeback has generated more buzz than every verse that you've posted And that's pathetic, so take the L cause you don't belong in the top spot You just got your ass kicked to the jump, and we ain't competing in hop scotch Fuck outta here, faggot. |
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03-05-09, 12:52 PM | #6 | ||
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I'm stopping your mental, drop full potential, I'm fucking insisting
my punches are hitting.. but you without 'me' is nothing but Misis feeding these lines of short spars, this student aint seeing me mims your not smart, I seen your report card... it said Deedede.. vs That shit is disgusting -- you're a lame bitch, and I'ma step to this trash Your whole style's underhanded, so it's obvious I got a leg up in this match As soon as I checked in came 200 views, dog, this nerd is just hopeless My comeback has generated more buzz than every verse that you've posted And that's pathetic, so take the L cause you don't belong in the top spot You just got your ass kicked to the jump, and we ain't competing in hop scotch Eh, i dont know. this is pretty close. bob i think you did alright, you've always got a few good solid bars in your verse...and your always consistent. I seen a few in there that i just really didnt like @ all. i've seen you come stronger, but overall not bad. mim this is the first i've seen from you in a while. it wasnt bad though. i can tell your def rusty...but you had alot of nice attempts. a few actually hit ok as well. so i got mim taking this seriously by a hair..good match guys
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03-05-09, 01:28 PM | #7 | |
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who's going to get killed?...
....(you dun fucked up)..... lol good intro got me amp for some raw shit... I'm stopping your mental, drop full potential, I'm fucking insisting my punches are hitting.. but you without 'me' is nothing but Misis.. decent start.... sunning a bitch when muscle head thinks his bars are polished off.. this dumb hater gets the punch breakers like mortal kombat blocks! good, but choppy flow.. feeding these lines of short spars, this student aint seeing me mims your not smart, I seen your report card... it said Deedede.. nah... rapping secretly, since 04 you've built some rep on the internet how he's got half the jump on his dick, and aint even win one yet so true... good... you little bitch! so I went to the hall of names and it isn't right nick called your originality aggressive..explaining that you didn't bite! would of hit alot better if worded better... but still decent... Quote: Originally Posted by Mimesis I haven't done this shit in 3 years but I'm still a beast. your an animal, I can't understand it though, your seeming fake a lonely geek, the only beast in hibernation 12 seasons straight good. spitting heated flames, battling vets, but your verse played bitch whole life is irony, like I smack you to death with a first aid kit haha funny... the worst fakeness, fuck your ego, your bars are booty bastard check your confidence, and know the meaning of over-enthusiastic didnt flow right with the set up... but i feel what u saying... truly ass kid... so fuck 80-0, and concepts from generic bitches your best battle's are crazy sets of gimmicks like the text Olympics decent.. back to this senseless killing, you prewrite the same old clout I can read you like a book... rip out your spine and pages fall out! nice... some good punches, some just didnt hit as hard due to ur set up bars, flow was good, even thou u had like a bar or 2 that could of been worded a bit better to flow better. concept's was good... good drop fam 8/10 vs Who the fuck is this kid? I'm 80-0 -- not including wins in leagues and tournaments. You're 1-0. I wrote verses 3 years ago that your best verse couldn't beat now. Get the fuck out of my face. *decent intro got me feeling like u might drop some heat...* I took a break for a long time, but the shit just doesn't seem to feel fair So I'll take another one to your neck. . . .and you can sit the next few plays out in a wheelchair the set up bar didnt make sense to me * i'll take another one to ur neck??* need better wording... The apple doesn't fall from the tree -- I know who you're around so fuck it We're only amazed by Bob, Eric when your faggot dads make out in public HA! good nameplay... That shit is disgusting -- you're a lame bitch, and I'ma step to this trash Your whole style's underhanded, so it's obvious I got a leg up in this match NAH weak... I'm like Lebron James in the lane -- dudes just keep paying me to stroll in But no one takes charges from lyrics. . . .we'd rather let him keep slam dunking his bullshit good set up and punch.. And you're hideous too -- I'm hot, but you could make it snow in summer So many moles on his body they used his picture to define Avogadro's number WHAT!?! nah... That's a chemistry joke cause I'm chemically dope -- just smashin' dudes I'll make you bail out this tourney so fast GM will come chasing after you decent but not hard hiting.. As soon as I checked in came 200 views, dog, this nerd is just hopeless My comeback has generated more buzz than every verse that you've posted decent... And that's pathetic, so take the L cause you don't belong in the top spot You just got your ass kicked to the jump, and we ain't competing in hop scotch decent... Fuck outta here, faggot. ^^ good ending lol... punches was good, some didnt make sense and some was jabs no knock out blows... flow: good, some area could of use better wording... concept: decent 8/10 after re-reading both verse i have it barberic wining this slightly, good battle drop from both much respect to ya and good luck... |
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03-05-09, 09:35 PM | #8 | |||
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The set up says, "I took a break for a long time. . ." The start of the punchline says "So I'll take another one. . ." "Taking another one" implied "Taking another break," as I had just mentioned it in the set up. The set up is supposed to set up the punchline. Notice I even used the same verb to help the reader remember what they just read 1 second ago in the set up -- "I TOOK a break" and "I'll TAKE another one." I didn't think it was that hard to get. 1-1. |
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03-05-09, 10:43 PM | #9 | ||
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I'm stopping your mental, drop full potential, I'm fucking insisting
my punches are hitting.. but you without 'me' is nothing but Misis.. hmm don't think I ever seen something like this. cool stuff sunning a bitch when muscle head thinks his bars are polished off.. this dumb hater gets the punch breakers like mortal kombat blocks! no.. this didn't work at all feeding these lines of short spars, this student aint seeing me mims your not smart, I seen your report card... it said Deedede.. wtf? no rapping secretly, since 04 you've built some rep on the internet how he's got half the jump on his dick, and aint even win one yet Too statementish. Not harsh at all you little bitch! so I went to the hall of names and it isn't right nick called your originality aggressive..explaining that you didn't bite! Ok, using links in punches is played out. And second, the punch isn't even that hard hitting. ehh Quote: Originally Posted by Mimesis I haven't done this shit in 3 years but I'm still a beast. your an animal, I can't understand it though, your seeming fake a lonely geek, the only beast in hibernation 12 seasons straight ehh doesn't work spitting heated flames, battling vets, but your verse played bitch whole life is irony, like I smack you to death with a first aid kit ehh the worst fakeness, fuck your ego, your bars are booty bastard check your confidence, and know the meaning of over-enthusiastic not harsh truly ass kid... so fuck 80-0, and concepts from generic bitches your best battle's are crazy sets of gimmicks like the text Olympics ok back to this senseless killing, you prewrite the same old clout I can read you like a book... rip out your spine and pages fall out! kinda cool Overall, started off with some creativity but really just fell off. Nothing too great here. Some lines were just way too statementish and could have been made a lot harder. mimesis I took a break for a long time, but the shit just doesn't seem to feel fair So I'll take another one to your neck. . . .and you can sit the next few plays out in a wheelchair set up had me thinking you coming with something tight. But punch really failed to hit hard The apple doesn't fall from the tree -- I know who you're around so fuck it We're only amazed by Bob, Eric when your faggot dads make out in public ehh I see what you trying but it was worded too sloppily That shit is disgusting -- you're a lame bitch, and I'ma step to this trash Your whole style's underhanded, so it's obvious I got a leg up in this match played sonnnn. lol playeddd I'm like Lebron James in the lane -- dudes just keep paying me to stroll in But no one takes charges from lyrics. . . .we'd rather let him keep slam dunking his bullshit ok And you're hideous too -- I'm hot, but you could make it snow in summer So many moles on his body they used his picture to define Avogadro's number ok That's a chemistry joke cause I'm chemically dope -- just smashin' dudes I'll make you bail out this tourney so fast GM will come chasing after you coo As soon as I checked in came 200 views, dog, this nerd is just hopeless My comeback has generated more buzz than every verse that you've posted haha nice swagger And that's pathetic, so take the L cause you don't belong in the top spot You just got your ass kicked to the jump, and we ain't competing in hop scotch ehh Overall, this verse was mediocre to your standards. Seems like you still shaking off the rust. You got your wording down, just need to make punches hit a little harsher. Not bad tho. Overall, wasn't really mch in this battle. But Mim really attempted more creativity with his lines and his punches were worded a lot better. So he gets this fairly easy. v/Mim
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03-05-09, 11:04 PM | #10 | |
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You know what that's true didn't even peep game fam o so in that case it was good my fult but since I voted already I don't think it matters now but my fult for that one kid...
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03-06-09, 06:06 PM | #11 | ||
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480 views and 3 votes.
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03-06-09, 06:14 PM | #12 | ||||
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03-07-09, 12:39 PM | #13 | ||
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I'm stopping your mental, drop full potential, I'm fucking insisting
my punches are hitting.. but you without 'me' is nothing but Misis.. lol I kides that was clever sunning a bitch when muscle head thinks his bars are polished off.. this dumb hater gets the punch breakers like mortal kombat blocks! not really feeling feeding these lines of short spars, this student aint seeing me mims your not smart, I seen your report card... it said Deedede.. lol this wasn't that bad rapping secretly, since 04 you've built some rep on the internet how he's got half the jump on his dick, and aint even win one yet not feeling you little bitch! so I went to the hall of names and it isn't right nick called your originality aggressive..explaining that you didn't bite! worded bad could of been ok your an animal, I can't understand it though, your seeming fake a lonely geek, the only beast in hibernation 12 seasons straight not feeling spitting heated flames, battling vets, but your verse played bitch whole life is irony, like I smack you to death with a first aid kit lol this was ok but not huge the worst fakeness, fuck your ego, your bars are booty bastard check your confidence, and know the meaning of over-enthusiastic na truly ass kid... so fuck 80-0, and concepts from generic bitches your best battle's are crazy sets of gimmicks like the text Olympics not gfeeling either back to this senseless killing, you prewrite the same old clout I can read you like a book... rip out your spine and pages fall out! ok but not huge I took a break for a long time, but the shit just doesn't seem to feel fair So I'll take another one to your neck. . . .and you can sit the next few plays out in a wheelchair na wasn't feeling The apple doesn't fall from the tree -- I know who you're around so fuck it We're only amazed by Bob, Eric when your faggot dads make out in public na poorly executed That shit is disgusting -- you're a lame bitch, and I'ma step to this trash Your whole style's underhanded, so it's obvious I got a leg up in this match this was ok but niot huge I'm like Lebron James in the lane -- dudes just keep paying me to stroll in But no one takes charges from lyrics. . . .we'd rather let him keep slam dunking his bullshit na And you're hideous too -- I'm hot, but you could make it snow in summer So many moles on his body they used his picture to define Avogadro's number again not feeling That's a chemistry joke cause I'm chemically dope -- just smashin' dudes I'll make you bail out this tourney so fast GM will come chasing after you wasn't feeling either As soon as I checked in came 200 views, dog, this nerd is just hopeless My comeback has generated more buzz than every verse that you've posted bragging to throw a punch is weak unless you do it perfectly and this wasn't And that's pathetic, so take the L cause you don't belong in the top spot You just got your ass kicked to the jump, and we ain't competing in hop scotch this was ok prolly one of the beter jump line but they are geting old not a bad battle weak though, gunna give it to boberric, more small punches landed.
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03-08-09, 01:07 AM | #14 | ||
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I'm stopping your mental, drop full potential, I'm fucking insisting
my punches are hitting.. but you without 'me' is nothing but Misis.. dope original concept i havent seen before.real nice.... sunning a bitch when muscle head thinks his bars are polished off.. this dumb hater gets the punch breakers like mortal kombat blocks! this was weak and worded badly.. feeding these lines of short spars, this student aint seeing me mims your not smart, I seen your report card... it said Deedede.. weak also....... rapping secretly, since 04 you've built some rep on the internet how he's got half the jump on his dick, and aint even win one yet so true... good... you little bitch! so I went to the hall of names and it isn't right nick called your originality aggressive..explaining that you didn't bite this was decent but worded badly.. your an animal, I can't understand it though, your seeming fake a lonely geek, the only beast in hibernation 12 seasons straight dope line here lol.............. spitting heated flames, battling vets, but your verse played bitch whole life is irony, like I smack you to death with a first aid kit weak concept again... the worst fakeness, fuck your ego, your bars are booty bastard check your confidence, and know the meaning of over-enthusiastic weak............ truly ass kid... so fuck 80-0, and concepts from generic bitches your best battle's are crazy sets of gimmicks like the text Olympics decent.. back to this senseless killing, you prewrite the same old clout I can read you like a book... rip out your spine and pages fall out! ok................. Who the fuck is this kid? I'm 80-0 -- not including wins in leagues and tournaments. You're 1-0. ^^wtf does that have to do with anything?......... I took a break for a long time, but the shit just doesn't seem to feel fair So I'll take another one to your neck. . . .and you can sit the next few plays out in a wheelchair played concept and aint really no good punch here not to mention that if YOU took one to the neck then you'd be in the wheelchair:/......... The apple doesn't fall from the tree -- I know who you're around so fuck it We're only amazed by Bob, Eric when your faggot dads make out in public gay jokes are fuckin beyond played and you know that no matter how you word them... That shit is disgusting -- you're a lame bitch, and I'ma step to this trash Your whole style's underhanded, so it's obvious I got a leg up in this match weak... I'm like Lebron James in the lane -- dudes just keep paying me to stroll in But no one takes charges from lyrics. . . .we'd rather let him keep slam dunking his bullshit horrible.streched like fuckin crazy.syllabell count is 20 off at least.punch is garbage also.. And you're hideous too -- I'm hot, but you could make it snow in summer So many moles on his body they used his picture to define Avogadro's number gay that your studying his body... That's a chemistry joke cause I'm chemically dope -- just smashin' dudes I'll make you bail out this tourney so fast GM will come chasing after you decent but not hard hiting.. As soon as I checked in came 200 views, dog, this nerd is just hopeless My comeback has generated more buzz than every verse that you've posted self glory?are you fuckin serious?in a battle?in 2009?no... And that's pathetic, so take the L cause you don't belong in the top spot You just got your ass kicked to the jump, and we ain't competing in hop scotch corny... battle was ok.bar had a few good punches while memisis had none and his flow was streched as fuck making the words hard to follow and the punches less effective at the same time.
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03-08-09, 01:08 AM | #15 | ||
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for better punches also for better concepts..........memisis was cracking gay jokes and talking about how dope he is:/
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